Exhibitionist: She's not catching the bus this morning

Ooh, I think we`re all entitled to a little voyeurism particularly a woman walking in stilettos beneath your window ... Excellent, thought provoking ink, Jade(y) ... love to you ... ~Devlin.

Ahh and love to you, dear Devlin.., I'm so glad for your enjoyment of this, I loved doing it! --Jade(y) xo

Quite the scenery you've laid out here!  I love the last stanza...very visually alive!  :)

Ooh thank you thank you, sweet Willow, for your enjoyment and embrace!  I had such fun...

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Jadey xo

Interesting way to assemble a poem Jade. Made for an great read! It reminds me of how I once created a poem from the titles of all of my introspective/self poems. It worked very well. It's called "A Self-portrait of Holes in a Story". Even the title came from other poems. I think I will record that one tonight. I can't make recordings of my poems during the day or evening because of all the background noise. Car horns, construction from the casino they ate building down the street, sirens from police, fire and ambulances constantly racing around town, kids next door yelling and various noises from the bar downstairs and whatever they are stomping on upstairs. Makes me want to move to the country...
JJ

Thanks so much, Joe, for stopping by for the read and express!

I know too well what you mean... how it goes when recording (or trying to, lol) recitations when outside interferences occur.😁

-Jadey x

Its a beautiful vision and I'm glad I caught this one.  You're so creative and clever, Jadey.  Love this write.

Ah dear Pish, you're so very kind to say (((hug))), and it gives me warm fuzzies, the way my write has pleased you.  With grateful thanks--

always
Jadey xo

What a wonderful little morning stroll... for all the world to see...

thanks for letting us have a look as well...

definitely enjoyed and so added to my reading list...

geoff

You spoil me, Geoffrey, but it's kinda nice, and lovely the way you've often supported my works on your RL.  Let's go for another stroll soon!

-Jadey xo

I knew I should've got up early... Great poem Jade, this structure was most interesting. Great read!




~anonshadow 😏

Why thank you, Anon, for visiting, to enjoy my fresh air walk.  The structure is from four different endless Forum challenges I posted in.  I saw that I had written a poem, post-by-post, so I spliced them together as one and -- voila!💡

Jade, you paint an alluring image of this sexy creature. Brava!

Thank you!  
Well, my first artist's passion of expression was as a traditional, painting with acrylics, pencil & pastel renditions, and Pentel marker sketches, so painting with words is now my main medium.✌️👩🎨

Sounds like a liberal neighbourhood - clever verses - liked

*soft giggle*

At least some of the early risers.😉

I'm so glad for your enjoyment, dearest!

I love the confidence of the female, she does not shy away from attention its like the stares of many carry her to her destination. someone i wish to be.  lovely peom

Creamyyy!  I /know/ you'll be that awesome femme force one day!  Thanks so much for embracing the piece, and for adding me to your Follows!😚xx

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