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Break soft,my heart
The chaos inside
Stunts my lips
I am mute
Withdrawn
I watch - I wait
The sun burns
My closed lids
Are no use
Futile
Too hot - too bright
I seek rain
My soul weeps
Tears of flame
Imbroglio
My torch - my ash
Shades of grey
You were there
Breath of mist
I came, I took
I fly - I cry
Stunts my lips
I am mute
Withdrawn
I watch - I wait
The sun burns
My closed lids
Are no use
Futile
Too hot - too bright
I seek rain
My soul weeps
Tears of flame
Imbroglio
My torch - my ash
Shades of grey
You were there
Breath of mist
I came, I took
I fly - I cry
Published 5th Oct 2016
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5th Oct 2016 10:12am
so beautiful, Kas;
my eyes behold, my heart remembers.
when we do not expect poetry, it comes in dreams...
my eyes behold, my heart remembers.
when we do not expect poetry, it comes in dreams...
5th Oct 2016 10:23am
Thankyou,John,so sweet. The heart always remembers and it dreams in shades of poetry while we sleep.....
5th Oct 2016 2:46pm
It reminds me of something beautifully urgent, yet with no haste involved. Nicely done, I really like your style and this is a gorgeous poem. .
5th Oct 2016 5:10pm
Not my usual style,but there definately was a sense of ugency. I'm glad you picked up on it. Thank you for the great comment, I wasn't sure about posting this one...
5th Oct 2016 4:57pm
5th Oct 2016 5:18pm
5th Oct 2016 10:55pm
Imbroglio
Such a beautiful and underused word.
Lovely write, Kasai. The emotions were palpable.
Thank you for sharing.
Such a beautiful and underused word.
Lovely write, Kasai. The emotions were palpable.
Thank you for sharing.
6th Oct 2016 4:00am
I couldn't resist using that word and I always enjoy the hunt for new and interesting ones.
Thank you, so much for the wonderful comment....
Thank you, so much for the wonderful comment....
6th Oct 2016 2:59am
6th Oct 2016 8:02am
6th Oct 2016 4:10am
Yes lady poetic mistress!,
and I mean that by the way,
because love you are transcending..
myfreakativeword
-Howlings
and I mean that by the way,
because love you are transcending..
myfreakativeword
-Howlings
6th Oct 2016 8:06am
Howlings,I do enjoy your words,like lovely poems in comment form. Thank you for reading mine, so appreciated....
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6th Oct 2016 8:20am
6th Oct 2016 5:34pm
I came, I took
I fly - I cry > the most beautiful ending to a brilliant poem!!!
Had to look up Imbroglio... what an amazing word, love it!
It might be in one of my poems one day...
I fly - I cry > the most beautiful ending to a brilliant poem!!!
Had to look up Imbroglio... what an amazing word, love it!
It might be in one of my poems one day...
6th Oct 2016 11:48pm
Thanks,so much!
And that amazing word,I absolutely love it. The never ending quest for intersting words...
I'll watch for it in your poetry.
And that amazing word,I absolutely love it. The never ending quest for intersting words...
I'll watch for it in your poetry.
Anonymous
6th Oct 2016 7:08pm
Oh, my ... sorry, Lady Kasai, I`m just speechless ... ~xo, Devlin
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7th Oct 2016 00:12am
7th Oct 2016 10:38am
Awefreakingsome!!! N your ending...felt like the release
begat freedom...to fly, to cry
to just be... :)
begat freedom...to fly, to cry
to just be... :)
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