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Skin Laundry
We become lovers again
grinding between these walls
washing tomorrow’s sin
the skin remembers
the scent, lingering musk
of leather and dusk
undisturbed by racing rivulets
the swell of flesh
yields to temperament of
morning air, barely grazing
blooming buds blushed pink
the color of yesterday’s lips
sweet stains on labyrinth of love
circling circumference
of unshaped moans
arches resigned on
geometry of your flesh
dazed gravity of pull n’ tug
bridges abridged under
ocean's bed.
I hear you whisper
with a slow strumming of
southern sunset charm
dragging O’s
to unknown horizons, and
etching U’s in my ear
Woman, I’ll make you mine in a heartbeat!
I can’t seem to wash
the naked smile from my face.
Knowing, owning. Owned.
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Re. Skin Laundry
3rd Oct 2016 6:47pm
I really liked the unforced,natural rhyme throughout the piece, Rina.
The imagery is visible, i.e. - leather and dusk...both have a very distinctive
affect on the psyche. And that final line - slam dunk; nothing but net.
Well done, Girl.
The imagery is visible, i.e. - leather and dusk...both have a very distinctive
affect on the psyche. And that final line - slam dunk; nothing but net.
Well done, Girl.
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4th Oct 2016 4:44pm
Thank you for your awesome comment Ahavati.
The whole poem started around one line and the rest came so easy, natural and the images were too vivid to ignore.
The whole poem started around one line and the rest came so easy, natural and the images were too vivid to ignore.
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3rd Oct 2016 7:39pm
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4th Oct 2016 4:37pm
Thank you Gabriel, yes the title is unique and it comes from a very special place, very close to my heart.
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Woman...you....you...you're badass with a pen! This poem had me staring at the screen for no damn reason. Hypnotized I tell ya.. :)
I don't have words....
I don't have words....
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Re: Re. Skin Laundry
4th Oct 2016 4:35pm
Ah Rain you made me smile with your comment, coming from you is a huge compliment being the reigning queen of erotic love :)
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4th Oct 2016 12:47pm
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7th Oct 2016 5:18am
"labyrinth of love
circling circumference
of unshaped moans " you stitch such sweet lines together Vee, lol luv the end...
circling circumference
of unshaped moans " you stitch such sweet lines together Vee, lol luv the end...
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Re. Skin Laundry
7th Oct 2016 11:48am
even in the beauty, I feel the sweat;
real love makes for down & real sex...
real love makes for down & real sex...
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There's something totally captivating about a new muse and new discoveries. I'm thoroughly enjoying the adventure John.
Re. Skin Laundry
28th Oct 2016 4:46pm
I'm impressed by the diction and metaphors/similes within the poem. You are very skillful Vee. I enjoyed.
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30th Oct 2016 5:21am
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22nd Nov 2016 6:32pm
Congratulations, Rina! This piece was selected to feature on our Facebook page!
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25th Feb 2017 5:23am
I love the swelling flesh pressed and massaged with my name to Your lips. Such sensual Artistry-Grips me like no one Ever!!!
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