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Kool-Aid
I won't drink your Kool-Aid
arsenic poisoned Jim Jones style
cult of the lost
I'm above you
reeking of insanity
deity of fiends
your godhead is obscene
you grazed me
with a palsied hand
shaking with disease
I slipped your slimy grasp
covetous creature
three headed beast
forked tongue spitting lies
aborted feelings
in death throes
I stomp on them
put um out of their misery
disgust grips my guts
sullied, trashed, mind raped
you grazed me
with a palsied hand
shaking with disease
I slipped your slimy grasp
shudders run down my spine
a full dose of Lucifer
leaves me cold
I won't drink your Kool-Aid
arsenic poisoned Jim Jones style
cult of the lost
my third eye is on you
not a blind cunt
caught in a trap
slipped your noose
as the hunted
begins the hunt
Published 1st Oct 2016
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1st Oct 2016 6:19am
I always loved the term "don't drink the kool-aid" For me it means be an individual.
Awesome Crim ^^
Awesome Crim ^^
1st Oct 2016 6:25am
thank you DC great interpretation yeah you don't want none of this Kool-Aid make you sick..
love Crim
love Crim
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1st Oct 2016 11:15am
Turning the tables on your demon always feels good...
Will there be a sequel?
JJ
Will there be a sequel?
JJ
1st Oct 2016 5:57pm
it was kind of a rant JJ no sequel do I see in the works..
thank you for the read and comment..
love Brenda
thank you for the read and comment..
love Brenda
1st Oct 2016 1:47pm
Always been more of salt girl than sweets, myself. Don't touch the kool-aid, it's not all its cracked up to be. ;)
1st Oct 2016 5:58pm
1st Oct 2016 3:47pm
as the hunted
begins the hunt > smashing last lines to a powerful piece!
Keep standing above them!
Love, Duende
begins the hunt > smashing last lines to a powerful piece!
Keep standing above them!
Love, Duende
1st Oct 2016 5:59pm
1st Oct 2016 8:11pm
So glad you turn the tables Crim! Jim Jones gave the beverage a bum rep. I preferred the electric Kool-Aid provided by the Merry Pranksters back in the '60s. But your poem does have a visionary quality to it, albeit horrific here and there. Down the hatch!
2nd Oct 2016 11:32am
Anonymous
1st Oct 2016 11:28pm
My Beautiful Brenda.....there's my girl....one must never underestimate you...you can be timid and so ever sweet but be sure, never to cross you...
"my third eye is on you
not a blind cunt
caught in a trap
slipped your noose
as the hunted
begins the hunt"
I love you so very much!
xoxoxo Taryn
"my third eye is on you
not a blind cunt
caught in a trap
slipped your noose
as the hunted
begins the hunt"
I love you so very much!
xoxoxo Taryn
2nd Oct 2016 11:33am
2nd Oct 2016 2:07am
Don't drink the Kool-Aid! You have a great way with words. It carries great edge but rarely crosses past the point of necessity.
2nd Oct 2016 11:34am
2nd Oct 2016 6:19am
2nd Oct 2016 11:34am
Anonymous
3rd Oct 2016 9:45pm
Brenda.. this is brilliant.. loved the "Jim Jones" line.. you're on a roll.. truly at the top of your game.. i'm so enjoying reading your work.. love you!!
Dave
Dave
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