Poet Whore

 I myself have had similar thoughts. Loved this. <3

thank you Mysterious one for feeling me on this..

love Crim

This is funny... no really, it is. When I saw the title, what did I read? Not 'Poet Whore'... but 'Pet Whore'.

Of course the pic only reinforces that I really may not have been so wrong. Freudian slip or prescience? Who knows. S'pose I should go read the poem now...

funny indeed :)

hope you enjoyed the write..

love Crim

Yes I did thank you... and now the world knows what I desire :)

i'm happy then AKM :)

love Crim

Ms. Brenda,
  I think that we have all
partaken in "mental masturbation"
through the words and phrases of others here. I find it a quite satisfying  release in my brain.
Enjoyed as always...btw
Hot pic

Loves
Keith

thank you graciously dearest Keith..

xo Brenda

God damn that's hot!

thank you Chaotic made me smile wide :)

love Crim

thank you love lady :)

love Crim

This is everything

thank you most kindly for a great comment..

love Crim

aw thank you Lily for reading my explicit porno ;)

love Crim

There is a demon in your writing sometimes Crim and what's most beautiful about that demon is she is effortless in her delivery (which is not something you see everyday)  
 
It's that demon that drops lines like "fist fuck prose" which lets face it is as rough as being anal fucked by a cactus, when it hits the page but it sits so naturally on your page. Brings back memories of a poet I haven't seen on DU for ages... "RedTBird" do you remember him?  Like his style you've stripped and humiliated your subject her just as effortlessly.  
 
Your narrative in this piece starts as a story teller and she's sexy AF then for some reason suddenly she moves into the "you" and "I" / "me" thing ... I think it changes your piece and you would be better choosing one or the other (and the story teller narrative works well) !  
 
Nice, rough, dark and sexy write... Gets my vote...thanks for the read my friend  
 
Al-x-

thank you AL yes you're right about that demon it sometimes steals the pen and poems like these are born.. yes I do remember him now that I think about.. tricky business for me to not get sidetracked when writing.. thank you for enjoying the narrative in this write before I got a little derailed..


love Brenda

"a man of wealth and class  
I burn with need  
only you have what it takes  
to put this cunt in her place "
 love it 😈 I miss having a sub :(
  
  

thank you Mr hopefully you will find another :)

love Crim

if it's not rough it's not fun slow and sweet tan be enjoyable sometimes tho good write

thank you yes both are equally enjoyable ;)

love Crim

poetry is definitely a rush, Crim,
we chase her like a harlot.
solid & erotic writing...

thank you John she is indeed a Harlot..

love Crim

Honestly, when I read the title I wasn't sure I would like this.  As I read I just was drawn in.  It's not crude, just rough.  I couldn't help but selfishly want someone to feel like this about what I wrote.  Kudos here.  Very sexy stuff.

thank you i'm happy you enjoyed the ride someone could be writing about you without you knowing it so don't feel bad..

love Crim

giggling thank you Todski love your comment ;)

love Brenda

A rough and sexy ride, Crim.  I seriously doubt anyone could tame you.  Even the gent you're addressing here should proceed with caution.  It's an honor and privilege to read the Poet Whore, and learn.

thank you Sir Crow you may be right about that.. my demons are wild and can't really be tamed..

love Crim

My Beautiful Brenda...you know I have been here...and at times we have been here at the very exact same time *wink with an evil grin*...love this ink lovely one.

I love you

Taryn xoxo

thank you my beautiful lady yes we have says giggling :)

I love you..

xo Brenda

Brenda.. brilliantly done.. i know the feeling.. from a male prospective.. many poetess's have had me.. whether they knew it or not.. loved this ink.. and love you!!



Dave

I think as poets we fall deep for each other on a fairly regular basis.. thank you Dave..

love you my friend..

xo Brenda