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Nympho
she fuckety fucks
the fuck out of you
CAUSE
she’s got the potion
to keep you in motion
lethal blood
killer boobies
vampire eyes
queen of night
she’s a fucked up
DYNAMITE
waiting to explode
leaving trails of dirt
and seed on your
fucking sheets
you thought you
were the lucky one
with your private
nymphomaniac
too bad, soon she
will be pole dancing
on his delicious parts
CAUSE
she's the one and only
fucking cyber lover killer
the fuck out of you
CAUSE
she’s got the potion
to keep you in motion
lethal blood
killer boobies
vampire eyes
queen of night
she’s a fucked up
DYNAMITE
waiting to explode
leaving trails of dirt
and seed on your
fucking sheets
you thought you
were the lucky one
with your private
nymphomaniac
too bad, soon she
will be pole dancing
on his delicious parts
CAUSE
she's the one and only
fucking cyber lover killer
Author's Note
Mylène Farmer - Sextonik.
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Re. Nympho
15th Sep 2016 6:57pm
Inspired by the fuckety fucked up DevilsChild and his fuckingly funny message...
Re: Re. Nympho
15th Sep 2016 7:10pm
Haha! Didn't know fuckity fuck was so inspiring 😁
great job on this! Perfection 👍
great job on this! Perfection 👍
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Re: Re. Nympho
15th Sep 2016 7:13pm
Apparently it was and btw: it was fuckity fuck the fuck ;-)
Thank you for commenting and including it in your reading list!
Thank you for commenting and including it in your reading list!
Re. Nympho
Anonymous
15th Sep 2016 7:20pm
ahem ... you had me at:
`Lethal blood
Killer boobies
Vampire eyes`
anything Vampire, Vampiric or Vampirism just gets my blood flowing. . .Maybe one day I shall add this to one of my many Vampire novels. . .Erotic Wicked Ink. . .love to you, Lady Duende. . .~Devlin.
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Re: Re. Nympho
You write Vampire novels? Why am I not surprised ;-)
Adding this to one of them would be... ehm... oké, that will come...
Lady Devlin, thank you so much for your amazing comment, glad to hear it got your blood flowing!
I really appreciate your visits tremendeously!!!
Love, Duende
Adding this to one of them would be... ehm... oké, that will come...
Lady Devlin, thank you so much for your amazing comment, glad to hear it got your blood flowing!
I really appreciate your visits tremendeously!!!
Love, Duende
Re. Nympho
Anonymous
15th Sep 2016 7:30pm
Daaaamn!! That gets all the feels going.
Sexy as hell 💋
Steamy ink 💓
Sexy as hell 💋
Steamy ink 💓
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Re: Re. Nympho
15th Sep 2016 7:36pm
Thank you so much, lovely Heart! ♥
Glad to hear that my poem got the feels going!
You always make me smile with your comments :-)
Glad to hear that my poem got the feels going!
You always make me smile with your comments :-)
Re. Nympho
15th Sep 2016 8:49pm
"Too bad, soon she
will be pole dancing
on his delicious parts "<---- now that was hot!
Kinda' dark but sexy piece and Rain likes. :) Missed your ink Duende....
will be pole dancing
on his delicious parts "<---- now that was hot!
Kinda' dark but sexy piece and Rain likes. :) Missed your ink Duende....
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Re: Re. Nympho
Rain!!! So happy to see you back, missed you!
Thanks for your comment, I'm glad you liked it :-)
Thanks for your comment, I'm glad you liked it :-)
Re. Nympho
16th Sep 2016 1:39am
Lol, I love your tones of humour and
as well as the whole of.. its
capturing love
-Howlings
as well as the whole of.. its
capturing love
-Howlings
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Re: Re. Nympho
16th Sep 2016 1:47am
Thank you so much, Howlings!
I'm glad you picked up on the humour part
CAUSE
I had so much fun writing this one :-)
Your comments are truly appreciated!
I'm glad you picked up on the humour part
CAUSE
I had so much fun writing this one :-)
Your comments are truly appreciated!
Re. Nympho
16th Sep 2016 5:55am
I like this.........sexual and erotic in a macabre-sort of way. On the other hand, this could easily be a lyric to an 80's funk song ala Ohio Players, Bootsie Collins or Parliament/Funkadelic. I can dig it LOL
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Re: Re. Nympho
16th Sep 2016 6:15am
Thank you so much, MrM :-)
Normally I don't write this explicit, so I knew I had to do 'something' with it... humour... horror... just something... glad you picked that up!
Ah, I see I have some music to discover, I like that!
Funkadelic... I see a poem title, might take some time...
I truly appreciate your comments, thank you!
Normally I don't write this explicit, so I knew I had to do 'something' with it... humour... horror... just something... glad you picked that up!
Ah, I see I have some music to discover, I like that!
Funkadelic... I see a poem title, might take some time...
I truly appreciate your comments, thank you!
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16th Sep 2016 10:36am
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Re: Re. Nympho
16th Sep 2016 12:17pm
Re. Nympho
16th Sep 2016 10:55am
Fuckin funny fuckity fuck lingo! lol
Oh n yea I'm kinda into nymphos, but not the kind that literally kills lol
Nice spillin! lol
Oh n yea I'm kinda into nymphos, but not the kind that literally kills lol
Nice spillin! lol
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Re: Re. Nympho
16th Sep 2016 12:26pm
Thank you so much!
You always make me smile with your comments :-)
Don't worry, dear... no one is getting killed here!
You always make me smile with your comments :-)
Don't worry, dear... no one is getting killed here!
Re. Nympho
16th Sep 2016 7:02pm
Totally twisted! The dark and the darque (sensual darkness) came together so beautifully. It has challenged me to write a poem of this caliber.
You thought you
were the lucky one
with your private
nymphomaniac
This paragraph says; Just like a man to think hit the jackpot right? I love how you exploit that aspect as well.
You thought you
were the lucky one
with your private
nymphomaniac
This paragraph says; Just like a man to think hit the jackpot right? I love how you exploit that aspect as well.
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Re: Re. Nympho
17th Sep 2016 7:06am
Yes, you are right ;-)
Thank you so much for your comment!
Totally twisted... I like that :-)
Great to hear it has inspired you to write a poem... I look forward to it!
Thank you so much for your comment!
Totally twisted... I like that :-)
Great to hear it has inspired you to write a poem... I look forward to it!
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Anonymous
19th Sep 2016 4:04am
It's not hard to pick up the humour on this one: you got me at the start with "fuckety fucks", carried me along with potion/motion, and sealed it at "killer boobies". After that, I read it all with a smirk and a giggle lurking in the background. :-)
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Re: Re. Nympho
19th Sep 2016 6:50am
Thank you so much for your comment!
Glad to hear you picked up the humour and had a good giggle, that was my intention with this poem (though I thought I was gonna loose some followers, haha)
Glad to hear you picked up the humour and had a good giggle, that was my intention with this poem (though I thought I was gonna loose some followers, haha)
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Anonymous
19th Sep 2016 5:33pm
I had to laugh at the opening....Fuckety fucking fuck is something I say frequently when the situation fits...really enjoyed this Duende...read smooth as butta and got blood flowing...
With love - Taryn xoxo
With love - Taryn xoxo
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Re: Re. Nympho
19th Sep 2016 6:35pm
Really? You say that? Haha, that's insane ;-)
I say fuck a lot and someone mentioned in message fuckety fuck and since then it's fuckety fuck :-D
So glad to hear you enjoyed this one, I had a lot of fun writing it!
With love, Duende
I say fuck a lot and someone mentioned in message fuckety fuck and since then it's fuckety fuck :-D
So glad to hear you enjoyed this one, I had a lot of fun writing it!
With love, Duende
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3rd Oct 2018 1:19am
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Re. Nympho
3rd Oct 2018 11:00pm
This was a cool, cruel, different and interesting turn of style for you. Love the experimentation with one-word focus and alliteration, it makes a rhythm all its own
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Re: Re. Nympho
4th Oct 2018 6:37am
Thank you for commenting on this one, Taurus... it's one of my favorites :-)
A message exchange and a challenge started this and I thought "OMG how am I going to put fuckety fuck the fuck in a poem without it getting to much attention?" I usually avoid the word fuck... the solution was putting a whole lot of fuck in it and going over the top, I had so much fun writing this!
A message exchange and a challenge started this and I thought "OMG how am I going to put fuckety fuck the fuck in a poem without it getting to much attention?" I usually avoid the word fuck... the solution was putting a whole lot of fuck in it and going over the top, I had so much fun writing this!