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Only you baby
I am in love you!
I am in love with your smile and your cries
You turned my sadness into dance.
You make me laugh and cry, both at the same time. I laugh because I have you and I cry with the idea of losing you.
I am in love with you man! What can I do?
You are my everything only only you.
I am in love with your smile and your cries
You turned my sadness into dance.
You make me laugh and cry, both at the same time. I laugh because I have you and I cry with the idea of losing you.
I am in love with you man! What can I do?
You are my everything only only you.
Published 15th Sep 2016
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15th Sep 2016 11:39am
You break my heart in pieces and yet I love you deeper
We fight a lot of time , and at night you call upon me when you shiver
I will be hear for you and there in your head
I will chat with you here and you will feel wet as I give you head
We fight a lot of time , and at night you call upon me when you shiver
I will be hear for you and there in your head
I will chat with you here and you will feel wet as I give you head
25th Oct 2016 2:06am
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15th Sep 2016 11:51pm
16th Sep 2016 6:14am
19th Sep 2016 9:19pm
Tugs the heart strings (it certainly would if a woman I had met said that to me). Favourite lines, for their stark contrast:
You make me laugh and cry, both at the same time. I laugh because I have you and I cry with the idea of losing you.
"You turned my sadness into a dance" reminds me of the line in a song I have sung in church, "Jesus turned our sorrow into dancing.."
You make me laugh and cry, both at the same time. I laugh because I have you and I cry with the idea of losing you.
"You turned my sadness into a dance" reminds me of the line in a song I have sung in church, "Jesus turned our sorrow into dancing.."
20th Sep 2016 7:08pm
Thank you very much. I believe the same man Jesus is the center of our relationship
