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We Get into Bed at Night
We both have physical jobs
By 11 or 11:30 we're spent
She gives our 15 year old puppy her meds
I watch her amazed by her humor and gentleness
We'll be married 26 years tomorrow
A lot of laughs and love
I always say the same thing about sleep
We're like cellphones needing to recharge
Sometimes we get close
Body on body, side by side
Old marrieds, touching, romancing, grateful
In the morning, coffee and conversation, then out the door
By 11 or 11:30 we're spent
She gives our 15 year old puppy her meds
I watch her amazed by her humor and gentleness
We'll be married 26 years tomorrow
A lot of laughs and love
I always say the same thing about sleep
We're like cellphones needing to recharge
Sometimes we get close
Body on body, side by side
Old marrieds, touching, romancing, grateful
In the morning, coffee and conversation, then out the door
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Re. We Get into Bed at Night
Anonymous
8th Sep 2016 11:56pm
Happy Anniversary [I think?]. . .love to my Speak. . .i liked this, a lot. . .~Devlin.
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Re. We Get into Bed at Night
9th Sep 2016 00:00am
See, I can still write a sweet one now and again ....
Thx Dev
Appreciate you
Xo
Thx Dev
Appreciate you
Xo
Re. We Get into Bed at Night
Anonymous
9th Sep 2016 1:14am
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9th Sep 2016 1:19am
Re. We Get into Bed at Night
9th Sep 2016 8:34am
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9th Sep 2016 11:50am
Yeah ....
We had a discussion in the middle of the night about why people name their dogs the names they give them. Then I tried to cop a feel and she allowed it for a few minutes and then sent me packing to my side of the bed.
We had a discussion in the middle of the night about why people name their dogs the names they give them. Then I tried to cop a feel and she allowed it for a few minutes and then sent me packing to my side of the bed.
Re. We Get into Bed at Night
9th Sep 2016 11:49am
Re. We Get into Bed at Night
9th Sep 2016 12:32pm
A tenderness felt splashed
across the page. Enjoyed
reading this side of you.
Congrats
Keith
across the page. Enjoyed
reading this side of you.
Congrats
Keith
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Re: Re. We Get into Bed at Night
9th Sep 2016 1:52pm
I used to write like this all the time, then I got tainted and started writing sex poems.
Sex poems are fun to write but these are more satisfying. Observation Ruies !!!
Thanks for your great comment
Sex poems are fun to write but these are more satisfying. Observation Ruies !!!
Thanks for your great comment
Re. We Get into Bed at Night
9th Sep 2016 12:40pm
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9th Sep 2016 1:53pm
Re. We Get into Bed at Night
9th Sep 2016 2:18pm
There's a true intimacy about this one is very beautiful. A comfort level that's irreplaceable. Very nice! Happy anniversary! :)
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9th Sep 2016 3:05pm
Re. We Get into Bed at Night
9th Sep 2016 8:50pm
The poem could be growing out of the title. Happy anniversary, shows married life need not be boring after all this time. Wish you 'cellphones' many more years of recharging.
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Re. We Get into Bed at Night
9th Sep 2016 10:57pm
Re. We Get into Bed at Night
Anonymous
10th Sep 2016 4:46am
Dearest Poe....very lucky you are to share like you can and do with this lucky gal...Happy Anniversary to you both from the bottom of my heart...so many thoughts I have right now and I shall keep them to myself....enjoy my special Poe, enjoy....
With love -
S
xoxoxo <~~ you get extrees this time ;)
With love -
S
xoxoxo <~~ you get extrees this time ;)
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Re: Re. We Get into Bed at Night
10th Sep 2016 1:19pm
Wow, I love the extra xoxo's
Yeah, we're a unique combo
My friends all thought it wouldn't last because I was a wild man back in the day .....
Thank you T
You Rule
Xoxo
Yeah, we're a unique combo
My friends all thought it wouldn't last because I was a wild man back in the day .....
Thank you T
You Rule
Xoxo
Re. We Get into Bed at Night
10th Sep 2016 10:14am
Happy anniversary ... That's a warmth that makes the reader nestle in with a cup of coffee.
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Re. We Get into Bed at Night
10th Sep 2016 1:22pm
Thanks Lo
We went out for Argentine food and came home to watch the Mets beat the Braves in the late innings. Sipping the last of some quality Irish Whiskey. A fun night
We went out for Argentine food and came home to watch the Mets beat the Braves in the late innings. Sipping the last of some quality Irish Whiskey. A fun night
Re. We Get into Bed at Night
Anonymous
10th Sep 2016 5:48pm
Truth.. great ink..
Dave
Dave
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10th Sep 2016 9:42pm