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HUMMINGBIRD HAIKU

I see you sipping
At my crimson bottlebrush
Flashy hummingbird
SatInUGal
Written by SatInUGal (Kumar)
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Re. HUMMINGBIRD HAIKU
7th Sep 2016 10:13pm
cute
SweetOblivion
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Re: Re. HUMMINGBIRD HAIKU
(Kumar)
8th Sep 2016 00:58am
I kind of maybe think of it as a slightly erotic haiku. Did that come through at all?
SatInUGal
Re: Re. HUMMINGBIRD HAIKU
8th Sep 2016 7:28am
crimson always has erotic undertones
SweetOblivion
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Re. HUMMINGBIRD HAIKU
1st Aug 2018 10:20pm
Hahaha, I totally get it. Unique way of adressing the subject
Angelast1
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