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HUMMINGBIRD HAIKU

I see you sipping
At my crimson bottlebrush
Flashy hummingbird

Written by SatInUGal

(Kumar)

Published 7th Sep 2016

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Re. HUMMINGBIRD HAIKU

7th Sep 2016 10:13pm

cute

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8th Sep 2016 00:58am

I kind of maybe think of it as a slightly erotic haiku. Did that come through at all?

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8th Sep 2016 7:28am

crimson always has erotic undertones

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Re. HUMMINGBIRD HAIKU

1st Aug 2018 10:20pm

Hahaha, I totally get it. Unique way of adressing the subject

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