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Web of snowfall
Unearthly and bitter
Cherish my spirit with your tender fingers
I wish to die covered by your mantle
As a remembrance of your forsaken lands
Unearthly and bitter
Cherish my spirit with your tender fingers
I wish to die covered by your mantle
As a remembrance of your forsaken lands
Published 6th Sep 2016
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7th Sep 2016 11:49am
I like the symbolism in your poems, but perhaps you can try to extend it a bit. It helps to create the setting/image in the readers mind. Good stuff.
12th Sep 2016 9:46am
24th Sep 2016 12:34pm
