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Speechless
I can never stumble
on the right words
the dislocated ones I find,
just fall and tumble
out of my mouth, bumbling
it's too hard to navigate word order
through the fog of dizziness
the tip of your tongue evokes
disoriented busyness
disrupts my thought process
and causes my heart to erupt
while my vernacular chokes
on the right words
the dislocated ones I find,
just fall and tumble
out of my mouth, bumbling
it's too hard to navigate word order
through the fog of dizziness
the tip of your tongue evokes
disoriented busyness
disrupts my thought process
and causes my heart to erupt
while my vernacular chokes
Published 26th Aug 2016
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31st Aug 2016 9:38pm
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2nd Sep 2016 5:37pm
24th Sep 2017 11:07am
Well written? Some people stifle our creative. It sounds like you have one In your life.
16th Dec 2019 5:20am
Very snazzy style! This poem, regardless of it’s powerful content, is a delight to read. hey i'm write as well so please check my site poemtheart i hope you like thank you.. :)
25th Dec 2019 4:22pm
I quite enjoyed this, ScarlettA, and I know the feeling well...! You did a good job at describing it in a creative way that caught my attention.
Anyway, great writing! Oh, and Merry Christmas!
Anyway, great writing! Oh, and Merry Christmas!
23rd Mar 2024 3:14am
This poem beautifully captures the struggle and frustration of being unable to articulate thoughts and feelings effectively. The imagery of stumbling over words and the sensation of dizziness effectively conveys the disorientation and difficulty in finding the right words. The use of language such as "dislocated," "tumble," and "disrupted thought process" vividly illustrates the challenge of communication when one's mind feels overwhelmed. Overall, it's a poignant portrayal of the struggle with verbal expression and its emotional impact.
