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Discernment
I am vulnerable to your mood
Octopus tentacles reaching out,
Your energy, it casts a spell;
Not of silent whispers of love,
But thoughts best held within
Negative projections
Lingering emotions
Side effects of a world unseen;
Your experiences are infectious,
Discernment is my remedy.
Recognising the pull, as it comes;
With focused mind I wash you away
Octopus tentacles reaching out,
Your energy, it casts a spell;
Not of silent whispers of love,
But thoughts best held within
Negative projections
Lingering emotions
Side effects of a world unseen;
Your experiences are infectious,
Discernment is my remedy.
Recognising the pull, as it comes;
With focused mind I wash you away
Published 15th Aug 2016
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15th Aug 2016 4:29pm
Even though I have the same affliction , I couldn't have expressed it as beautifully as you have. My vocabulary is limited , compared to you. My grammar is wayward. I can't decipher the meaning of certain lines even though I have read them multiple times. The fault lies with me but I feel this is an inspiring poem both in content and correctness of language. Keep Sharing. Also , the title is apt.
Anonymous
16th Aug 2016 4:11pm
'I wash you away' this is a great line
