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Sweet Sticky Thang (The Meta-Physical Remix)
“You leave honey everywhere
Sometimes I wonder if you care
Who sees you when you do your thing
You sweet sticky thing.......”
my mind caught up in
the recalcitrant movement
of bombastic hips
igniting fiery desires
black steel melting inside
your pussy's lair, across this beautiful
continental divide
Visions of time passages
wrapped all around
every synapse firing
in my mind
….rotating my soul in reverse
your heat cures
this phallic sculpture
like a kiln
I'm on hard, awaiting
a sticky glaze that cools
my core deep within
we slip and slide
upon a gymkhana, we ride
plasmotic, synthesized
multiply,
divide
and our molecules
collide
until our fusion
explodes.....
…..into blinding flashes
of immeasurable energy
we blend into
a parallel dimension
you and me
a divinely perfect
synergy overload
a meta-physical con-funk-shun,
reshaping all time and space
between you and I
…'cause can't nobody do *me* like you,
my sweet sticky thing.
Published 15th Aug 2016
| Edited 16th Aug 2016
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15th Aug 2016 5:52am
15th Aug 2016 6:11am
Anonymous
15th Aug 2016 8:43am
honey bee......😋
Anonymous
15th Aug 2016 4:17pm
I quite like this one. Lots of fun words and sounds in it. Kept me engaged and wondering what was coming next.
The only thing that doesn't seem to fit for me, is this line: pleasured sexual tensions. That feeling is running throughout the entire poem, so the statement doesn't really add anything..
The only thing that doesn't seem to fit for me, is this line: pleasured sexual tensions. That feeling is running throughout the entire poem, so the statement doesn't really add anything..
15th Aug 2016 5:34pm
mariekeys said"..The only thing that doesn't seem to fit for me, is this line: pleasured sexual tensions. That feeling is running throughout the entire poem, so the statement doesn't really add anything.. "
I didn't think that line really flowed well either but at posting this this am, I couldn't think of anything else. Check the revision. Tell me what you think of that : )
I didn't think that line really flowed well either but at posting this this am, I couldn't think of anything else. Check the revision. Tell me what you think of that : )
