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A Torrid Encounter
She let her guard down
freein' all her inhibitions
ignoring the warning signs
the red flags...
disregardin' intuition
casting aside all fears
So unprepared was she
to shed real tears....
Swallowing her pride
grabbing destiny
by the throat boldly
courageous she was
n' brave she must be...
In her possession a treasure
every man wants to claim
her needs know no measure
n' he desires no refrain
still no man has gone
but wants to feed on
what every woman
wishes she still had
but lost from so long...
With eyes of indignation,
n' full of this knowledge
an unexpected invitation
the hymen is torn
innocence is taken,
n' an addict is born...
She was like
a piece of fruit,
ripened...
come to full fruition,
primed to his likin'
a passion he can't keep fightin'
Yet, there's no malice within thee
no terrany to take
innocence from her
it's not what he see...
Moreover, she's a treasure
to a weary heart
never will he abandon hope
that they'll ever part
becuz secretly within his soul,
he's loved her from the start...
Conceding to be
is what's feeding he
this supple woman bares
where he's placed seed to breed
As they rage in ecstasy like a sea
turbulent, tumultuous, unfettered, free
n' they scale the mountainous terrain
together, their passion buildin' momentum,
what's started as a flicker, now a ravenous flame...
Each bellow n' scream the holy name
she rains her pleasures, 'pon thee
givin' thy sacrificial frame,
calling out her blissful joy
softly, sweet, he hears his name...
He's the King of her heart
bound by unseen forces
She, Queen from the start
chariot, to his horses
Racin' their pulses quicken,
now with shortness of breath
lyin' at the apex of their pleasure,
fallin' ultimately, into a united climax...
She let her guard down
freein' all her inhibitions
ignoring the warning signs
the red flags...
disregardin' intuition
casting aside all fears
So unprepared was she
to shed real tears....
Swallowing her pride
grabbing destiny
by the throat boldly
courageous she was
n' brave she must be...
In her possession a treasure
every man wants to claim
her needs know no measure
n' he desires no refrain
still no man has gone
but wants to feed on
what every woman
wishes she still had
but lost from so long...
With eyes of indignation,
n' full of this knowledge
an unexpected invitation
the hymen is torn
innocence is taken,
n' an addict is born...
She was like
a piece of fruit,
ripened...
come to full fruition,
primed to his likin'
a passion he can't keep fightin'
Yet, there's no malice within thee
no terrany to take
innocence from her
it's not what he see...
Moreover, she's a treasure
to a weary heart
never will he abandon hope
that they'll ever part
becuz secretly within his soul,
he's loved her from the start...
Conceding to be
is what's feeding he
this supple woman bares
where he's placed seed to breed
As they rage in ecstasy like a sea
turbulent, tumultuous, unfettered, free
n' they scale the mountainous terrain
together, their passion buildin' momentum,
what's started as a flicker, now a ravenous flame...
Each bellow n' scream the holy name
she rains her pleasures, 'pon thee
givin' thy sacrificial frame,
calling out her blissful joy
softly, sweet, he hears his name...
He's the King of her heart
bound by unseen forces
She, Queen from the start
chariot, to his horses
Racin' their pulses quicken,
now with shortness of breath
lyin' at the apex of their pleasure,
fallin' ultimately, into a united climax...
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Re. Archives: (From the Heart series)
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Aug 2016 5:56pm
14th Aug 2016 5:55pm
You've..
umm, gotten the best of me,
ill return my dearest lovely
and wise one.
umm, gotten the best of me,
ill return my dearest lovely
and wise one.
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14th Aug 2016 8:10pm
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Anonymous
16th Aug 2016 2:00pm
Im just so speechless, will
have to write out my touchy
feely thoughts about this one.
It means that much to me
have to write out my touchy
feely thoughts about this one.
It means that much to me
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16th Aug 2016 2:27pm
Anonymous
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14th Aug 2016 6:41pm
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14th Aug 2016 8:15pm
Well u said plenty here, n I'm crazy honored n flattered :) thank u sweetie
Anonymous
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14th Aug 2016 11:22pm
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14th Aug 2016 11:28pm
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14th Aug 2016 7:17pm
Beautiful ink!!! Full of passion...so intense yet loving! Great write love! 💋💋💋
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Re: Re. Archives: (From the Heart series)
14th Aug 2016 11:04pm
Thank you my precious one, I'm truly honored n grateful for your continued support :)
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15th Aug 2016 1:57am
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14th Aug 2016 7:51pm
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14th Aug 2016 8:19pm
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14th Aug 2016 9:13pm
"As they rage in ecstasy like a sea
turbulent, tumultuous, unfettered, free
n' they scale the mountainous terrain
together, their passion buildin' momentum,
what's started as a flicker, now a ravenous flame..."
love the passion, flow and momentum of this write Poe :)
xo Crim
turbulent, tumultuous, unfettered, free
n' they scale the mountainous terrain
together, their passion buildin' momentum,
what's started as a flicker, now a ravenous flame..."
love the passion, flow and momentum of this write Poe :)
xo Crim
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Re: Re. Archives: (From the Heart series)
14th Aug 2016 11:13pm
I'm happy you loved it n humbled too... Thank you my sweet Crim., always grateful for your support :)
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14th Aug 2016 11:50pm
So unprepared was she
to shed real tears....
I think we have all been guilty of that. Amazing write
to shed real tears....
I think we have all been guilty of that. Amazing write
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Re: Re. Archives: (From the Heart series)
14th Aug 2016 11:55pm
For sure... Thank you my dear, I'm flattered you read n commented another piece! :) appreciate it so much :)
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15th Aug 2016 2:46am
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15th Aug 2016 2:56am
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15th Aug 2016 6:09am
The level of intimacy expressed here is breathtaking my brotha. .absolutely sensational! !!
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15th Aug 2016 11:14am
Thanks bro! Always humbled n honored by your presence n thoughts on my page... Much appreciated always :)
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15th Aug 2016 11:18am
This was Amazing Poetik...like watching a butterfly struggle to break free of its cacoon and take flight...beautiful...you passionately iterated how love requires a leap of faith..truly enjoyed this!!
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He's the King of her heart
bound by unseen forces
She, Queen from the start
chariot, to his horses
Fav lines:
He's the King of her heart
bound by unseen forces
She, Queen from the start
chariot, to his horses
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Re: Re. Archives: (From the Heart series)
3rd Sep 2016 10:23am
Thought I replied to this...sorry sweetie, but I do truly thank you for your wonder n sweet thoughts on my ink n as always I'm grateful for your continued support :)
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3rd Sep 2016 10:43am
Thought I replied to this...sorry sweetie, but I do truly thank you for your wonder n sweet thoughts on my ink n as always I'm grateful for your continued support :)
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15th Aug 2016 1:25pm
Beautiful ink! Love the passion and the intimicy in this piece!
As they rage in ecstasy like a sea
turbulent, tumultuous, unfettered, free > just brilliant!
As they rage in ecstasy like a sea
turbulent, tumultuous, unfettered, free > just brilliant!
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15th Aug 2016 2:22pm
Thank you! I'm truly grateful for your thoughts n support, appreciate you lady. :)
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Anonymous
15th Aug 2016 8:19pm
Sir Poetik. . .this reads like a contemporary myth which may only prove that nothing really has changed from the past to the present; something you captured so brilliantly in this piece. . .Enjoyed, to its fullest. . .~xo, Devlin.
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15th Aug 2016 10:16pm
Wow she came... :) I'm honored u have returned for visit, n very grateful for your time n thoughts n I'm happy you enjoyed... :)
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13th Sep 2016 4:06am
!
you have no idea what youve just done
something i can beyond , but depthly relate to
a breath, a long beautiful deep sincere sigh..
no need for elaborate names of positions,
just being and feeling,
just teaching and being taught..
I find this to be so so sexy and a turn on
as mouvement into each other between
these two ..becomes the ineffable
Thank you so much for this!!
-Howlings
you have no idea what youve just done
something i can beyond , but depthly relate to
a breath, a long beautiful deep sincere sigh..
no need for elaborate names of positions,
just being and feeling,
just teaching and being taught..
I find this to be so so sexy and a turn on
as mouvement into each other between
these two ..becomes the ineffable
Thank you so much for this!!
-Howlings
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13th Sep 2016 11:53am
Gosh you have lifted my spirit to amazing heights today with your beautiful thoughts on my work!
Deeply grateful for them n you... :)
Deeply grateful for them n you... :)
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24th Oct 2016 8:31am
Wow... Then I'd say you're very lucky n you need to hold on with both hands n never let go dude! :) thanks for the drop in n list add. I'm honored beyond words :)