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i have fallen in love with "Death"
.
. mmmmmm ..
it's almost as tho
he cares for my comfort
as i
lay here and die
his words seem graceful
as the ciggerette rests
"fear has crept" .. as i
listen ..
to his lips
leak lunacy
and
visualize ... love ..
"I Suppose Satan has Seduced Me ..
..and
"as he leads me into temptation"
a silhouette of my soul
surrenders to the shadows
Of darkness
"becoming heartless"
each beat less rhythmic
from the last
cryptic
soon to pass
but the song of submission
sings soflty
as i
drift
my soul lifts
only to gift the goul
that rules
the pool
of blood
loss
and i
have fallen in love
with "Death" ... ... ...
#Devilish
. mmmmmm ..
it's almost as tho
he cares for my comfort
as i
lay here and die
his words seem graceful
as the ciggerette rests
"fear has crept" .. as i
listen ..
to his lips
leak lunacy
and
visualize ... love ..
"I Suppose Satan has Seduced Me ..
..and
"as he leads me into temptation"
a silhouette of my soul
surrenders to the shadows
Of darkness
"becoming heartless"
each beat less rhythmic
from the last
cryptic
soon to pass
but the song of submission
sings soflty
as i
drift
my soul lifts
only to gift the goul
that rules
the pool
of blood
loss
and i
have fallen in love
with "Death" ... ... ...
#Devilish
Published 14th Aug 2016
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14th Aug 2016 5:17am
14th Aug 2016 5:49am
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14th Aug 2016 11:51pm
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17th Aug 2016 5:12am
Thank you guys i appreciate the read and feed back i wrote it about a man i have fallen in love wit but can't have much respect to you all .....
27th Jan 2017 4:06am
21st Oct 2018 8:15am
Death has many lovers
Are you certain You want to be a part of the harem?
Super ink -- drew me in, almost wanting, as well.
Are you certain You want to be a part of the harem?
Super ink -- drew me in, almost wanting, as well.
10th Jan 2020 5:23am
this poem regardless of it’s powerful content, is a delight to read... :)
