Cursed

Scream it out, Brenda. Giving into hope incarnate,
seeing the goddess within you. Each line is a line
of pseudo temperate though process. You need to
be where you have gone. You betcha! You will come
out of this . . . Kickass poetry!

thank you graciously Jerry :)

love Brenda

Such a fabulous passionate dark write.
It speaks into the depths...and howls at the darkness.

Brilliant ink.

thank you lovely Heart..

love Crim

Love the rawness in this. Excellent ink, my friend.

thank you Darkest Lord Hades I cherish your thoughts..

love Crim

Such a profound piece... raw... unfiltered... it breathes darkness and passion!

Love, Duende

thank you most graciously beautiful Duende..

love Crim

its hard to resist a woman so deadly 😁

Loved this poem

thank you DC love your visits..

love Crim

Hail to the Crimm ! Seated on her Throne. Wickedly written. Deathly you own.
Shaking the foundation of this Queendom you Reign ! Your lady in waiting bows down on my knees.
All hail thy Majesty.👑 Long live thy Queen!!!!

aw beautiful Trisha I'm blushing wildly so much love you've shown me and this darkened write thank you dearest lady :)

love Brenda

Miss Crim, Miss Crim. . .my ally in Darkness I believe it was the last line that tied up this piece exceptionally:  I Bite Back.  love to you, ~Devlin.

my Queen of Darkness Devlin thank you beautiful love you lady :)

xo Brenda

brutal, serpentine poetry, Crim,
made to torment & eviscerate.
somehow the beauty still shows thru...

thank you John deeply appreciate you seeing beauty in my darkness..

love Crim

thank you lovely Amelia for such a beautiful poetic comment :)

love Crim

Nicely wicked and seductive Lady Crim!  You offer warnings throughout, which I choose to ignore at my peril.  I'll live dangerously and say I love this even if you do bite back.  Seems fair enough to me.;)  

thank you Sir Crow nothing light was coming to me yesterday I was locked out of creativity and this is what came to me sigh I deeply appreciate you..

love Crim

Brenda.. this is so powerful, and i love it.. so many great lines.. but these three lines, just make the hair on my neck stand up..

the light and dark in me clashing  
I put on the night covering my sin  
wicked I delight in the cringe  

simply brilliant.. lovely one keep writing.. i'm digging it so much.. love you!!


Dave

thank you Dave that was my favorite part too :)

love you my friend..

xo Brenda

Seductive gothic dark lovely darkness, good stuff Crim!

thank you most kindly :)

love Crim

We have been warned and still it draws us in...

thank you I'm grateful that I can still draw you in..

love Crim

You're magnetic

you're wonderfully kind :)

We all have days such as these, Brenda. It feels good to let the darkness out.
The longer you hold it in, the more infectious it becomes, thus unbalancing
the lightness of being. Celebrate both, as we are all angels and demons:
One half demanding while the other enlightening and forgiving, Aren't we all?

What's so beautiful is that there are people who celebrate and accept both
sides of us with the realization they they too are equally both.  It's then we
realize we are here for each other - our light balancing their darkness, our
darkness seeking their light.

thank you Sage one for such an insightful comment as I struggle with my duality..

love Brenda

Bite me then lol I bite back with the lycan curse lol

thank you Kavik lycan soul you made me smile with your comment :)

love Brenda

I would be wary except I want to bite back n plunge three fingers into ur hot hole... I'm thinking that might ease ur vile tendencies n all ur left with is squirtin me ur joy :)

ah Poe you wicked devil you I fucking love it ;)

thank you my friend..

love Crim

Whoa Crim.....I'm luvng this very visual dark piece.....just wish I had read it while it was light outside.......LOL!! Moving ink that's for sure......enjoyed......purple luv & hugs xo :)

thank you lovely Flower hope it wasn't too scary lol :)

love Crim

thank you Todski for such an insightful and loving comment.. yes a fragile heart you're on the mark my tender side makes me feel vulnerable.. your thoughts are deeply appreciated..

love Brenda

Woops. I think u picked one intense chick to mess with. Like the format and edginess. Great content.*\m/(- _ - ) \ m / * *much respect * * given *

thank you was more me putting on my outer spikes really I'm quite soft..

love Crim