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He breaks me like the rain
He comes with his sheepdog eyes
his brown eyes, I can't resist
hits me with his bad boy pout
he's tricky, he wants to be kissed
I write odes to his savage lust
his jackhammer rips me apart
he's a man too tough for tears
they linger in my heart
his hair is wetly tousled
there's a snarl on his lip
his chest is inked with sailor girls
and a dragon on his hip
He has a purple heart
And eats me with a silver tongue
he strands me in his secret garden
the weeds he walks among
Love is his minefield
And after a broken rain
His cherry kisses and lemonade dreams
Inflame me in our sexual pain
I am his canvas
His picasso masterpiece
And he paints me in shades of sorrow
To extort my weeping release
his brown eyes, I can't resist
hits me with his bad boy pout
he's tricky, he wants to be kissed
I write odes to his savage lust
his jackhammer rips me apart
he's a man too tough for tears
they linger in my heart
his hair is wetly tousled
there's a snarl on his lip
his chest is inked with sailor girls
and a dragon on his hip
He has a purple heart
And eats me with a silver tongue
he strands me in his secret garden
the weeds he walks among
Love is his minefield
And after a broken rain
His cherry kisses and lemonade dreams
Inflame me in our sexual pain
I am his canvas
His picasso masterpiece
And he paints me in shades of sorrow
To extort my weeping release
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Re. He breaks me like the rain
12th Aug 2016 4:04am
Oh. My. God. This is beautiful. And sad...and...I got no more words...
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Re. He breaks me like the rain
12th Aug 2016 4:10am
Re. He breaks me like the rain
12th Aug 2016 4:10am
it's in the brown eyes, more than you speak of in your poem;
can you see it?
orgasm & tears - it's the dacryphilia that I long for.
your poem blooms in your beauty, Kasai...
can you see it?
orgasm & tears - it's the dacryphilia that I long for.
your poem blooms in your beauty, Kasai...
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Re. He breaks me like the rain
12th Aug 2016 4:17am
Re. He breaks me like the rain
12th Aug 2016 2:45pm
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12th Aug 2016 11:43pm
Re. He breaks me like the rain
12th Aug 2016 4:20pm
Oh Kasai, what a beautiful piece!
I am his canvas
His picasso masterpiece
And he paints me in shades of sorrow > lost for words...
I am his canvas
His picasso masterpiece
And he paints me in shades of sorrow > lost for words...
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12th Aug 2016 5:24pm
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13th Aug 2016 4:57am
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Re. He breaks me like the rain
13th Aug 2016 8:18pm
this poem reminds me so much of my husband, it is an instant favorite. great writing style, love how you can dive into his world
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14th Aug 2016 5:14am
Re. He breaks me like the rain
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Re. He breaks me like the rain
15th Aug 2016 2:25am
Re. He breaks me like the rain
16th Aug 2016 8:40pm
Woman!
omytinybitsofcosmicrain.
thats all I can say,
haaa, there you go beautiful
and this has gotten to be
one of the most pollinating
writes I have read in me life!
am sure of it.. Wow.. this is
Inspiration
-Howlings
omytinybitsofcosmicrain.
thats all I can say,
haaa, there you go beautiful
and this has gotten to be
one of the most pollinating
writes I have read in me life!
am sure of it.. Wow.. this is
Inspiration
-Howlings
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Re. He breaks me like the rain
16th Aug 2016 8:52pm
You are such a sweet lady!I love your amazing comments,they always make me smile. Thankyou for that....
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