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Wonderland
She’s got a poet spirit
always airy with wonder
about the mysteries of life
She’s got a hippie soul
and rainbows in her heart
wearing a myriad of colors
Wildflower scented
she has a dozen daisies
hiding in her long dark hair
Her free spirit dances
through fields of poppies
dreaming of amity and love
She believes in miracles
and in the age of aquarius
in peace and patchouli scent
She thinks of woodstock
stargazing and barefooted
longing for a love revolution
She will ask you to dance
and leave this world behind
on a magic trip to wonderland
always airy with wonder
about the mysteries of life
She’s got a hippie soul
and rainbows in her heart
wearing a myriad of colors
Wildflower scented
she has a dozen daisies
hiding in her long dark hair
Her free spirit dances
through fields of poppies
dreaming of amity and love
She believes in miracles
and in the age of aquarius
in peace and patchouli scent
She thinks of woodstock
stargazing and barefooted
longing for a love revolution
She will ask you to dance
and leave this world behind
on a magic trip to wonderland
Author's Note
Hair - The Age Of Aquarius.
https://youtu.be/BTZArvbmG_o
https://youtu.be/BTZArvbmG_o
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Re. Wonderland
11th Aug 2016 8:01pm
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11th Aug 2016 8:13pm
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Anonymous
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12th Aug 2016 4:04pm
Re. Wonderland
Anonymous
12th Aug 2016 4:50am
Such a hopeful piece....as usual wonderful ink.
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12th Aug 2016 4:06pm
Thank you for your wonderful comment!
Glad you enjoyed it and thought it was hopeful...
Glad you enjoyed it and thought it was hopeful...
Re. Wonderland
12th Aug 2016 6:03am
She will ask you to dance
and leave this world behind
on a magic trip to wonderland
This was amazing,you really did a great job...
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12th Aug 2016 4:07pm
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Anonymous
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12th Aug 2016 9:47pm
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13th Aug 2016 6:16pm
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Anonymous
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Re. Wonderland
13th Aug 2016 2:39pm
That's my kinda 'WONDER' ma'am :)... Too dreamy to be real for me sadly lol
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13th Aug 2016 6:17pm
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14th Aug 2016 4:34pm
Thanks for your compliment, much appreciated!
I understand why you suggest dropping 'long dark' and 'scent' (alliteration) but I prefer to leave it as it is...
Great to hear you loved the closing stanza!
Some other people mentioned that stanza as well, while I was having doubts about it, so this truly is a confirmation that I made the right decision :-)
I understand why you suggest dropping 'long dark' and 'scent' (alliteration) but I prefer to leave it as it is...
Great to hear you loved the closing stanza!
Some other people mentioned that stanza as well, while I was having doubts about it, so this truly is a confirmation that I made the right decision :-)
Re. Wonderland
Anonymous
15th Aug 2016 7:31pm
I wanted to comment on this earlier. . .Love the '60's flow, Lady Duende, and the "trip" through Wonderland;). . .~Devlin.
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15th Aug 2016 8:47pm
Thank you so much!
Glad to read you enjoyed the 60's flow!
You make my flower power heart sing :-)
Glad to read you enjoyed the 60's flow!
You make my flower power heart sing :-)
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16th Aug 2016 9:41am
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16th Aug 2016 10:31am
Re. Wonderland
25th Feb 2017 5:12pm
So beautiful...More than a lifestyle but an experience...I wish I was around in that time period ✌
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25th Feb 2017 5:24pm
Me too! I always say I should have been born earlier :-)
Thank you so much for your comment and taking her home with you!
Thank you so much for your comment and taking her home with you!
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Anonymous
9th Apr 2017 6:03pm
Such peace and freedom, but the scents you bring to them are, AHHH honey honey
makes me wander further! it was a fine day to read this love
makes me wander further! it was a fine day to read this love
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9th Apr 2017 7:03pm
This one is dear to my heart and so is your comment! You bring smiles to my day with your words... thank you so much, love, I really appreciate you! xXx
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