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Love Bug Spell
Wraping myself around you
I'll bite you and make you submissive
I'll spit lie upon lie upon lie
Until you're in my love cocoon
I want to watch you transform
Into someone just like me
To watch you continue the cycle
And pray someone frees you
From the spell you're now under
I'll bite you and make you submissive
I'll spit lie upon lie upon lie
Until you're in my love cocoon
I want to watch you transform
Into someone just like me
To watch you continue the cycle
And pray someone frees you
From the spell you're now under
Published 8th Aug 2016
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8th Aug 2016 8:06am
I wonder if you can make anyone submissive - I suppose you can force them to be passive for a while under threat and coercion but there will be pay back.
8th Aug 2016 8:24pm
9th Aug 2016 6:38am
Freeing anyone from a spell may well be a lot of fun - I hope you experience it - smiles
8th Aug 2016 12:57pm
8th Aug 2016 8:25pm
8th Aug 2016 8:25pm
Here's how I interpreted this:
The speaker uses flattery and deceit took get a person to fall head over heels in love for her (assuming the speaker is a female :P ). The speaker's victim is so in love that they are willing to do everything and anything for the speaker. But, then there's the lines "To watch you continue the cycle
And pray someone frees you". To me that sounds like the victim continues to be please the desires of the speaker, but at the same time is longing to escape. After all, they're "praying to escape". Sounds like some sort of abuse going on. All the while, the speaker is fully enjoying the benefits of this relationship and maybe enjoying watching the victim suffer. Such is the way with many bugs.
Just my thoughts! Absolutely love it. :)
The speaker uses flattery and deceit took get a person to fall head over heels in love for her (assuming the speaker is a female :P ). The speaker's victim is so in love that they are willing to do everything and anything for the speaker. But, then there's the lines "To watch you continue the cycle
And pray someone frees you". To me that sounds like the victim continues to be please the desires of the speaker, but at the same time is longing to escape. After all, they're "praying to escape". Sounds like some sort of abuse going on. All the while, the speaker is fully enjoying the benefits of this relationship and maybe enjoying watching the victim suffer. Such is the way with many bugs.
Just my thoughts! Absolutely love it. :)
9th Aug 2016 6:53pm
You definitely got most of what I was trying to get across. The line "To watch you continue the cycle
And pray that someone frees you"
Was the speaker voicing the regret that she cannot escape the cycle but she hopes her victim can before it is too lafe.
And pray that someone frees you"
Was the speaker voicing the regret that she cannot escape the cycle but she hopes her victim can before it is too lafe.
9th Aug 2016 6:59pm
8th Aug 2016 2:22pm
