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I'm Alright
Behind a cigarette
a brand new attitude,
no more banging
on the walls
I'm alright
since I backed up,
I see you, a spider
with no fly
Don't pretend you
fought with the light's on
We always did it in the dark
Behind a cigarette
look who's fucking smiling,
I'm alright
a brand new attitude,
no more banging
on the walls
I'm alright
since I backed up,
I see you, a spider
with no fly
Don't pretend you
fought with the light's on
We always did it in the dark
Behind a cigarette
look who's fucking smiling,
I'm alright
Published 30th Jul 2016
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30th Jul 2016 2:23pm
31st Jul 2016 2:39am
30th Jul 2016 3:02pm
31st Jul 2016 2:40am
30th Jul 2016 10:10pm
Niiice! "A spider with no fly" is an awesome line :) How 'bout a spider with nothing behind the fly...ouch ziiiiIip!
31st Jul 2016 2:41am
31st Jul 2016 11:06am
Don't pretend you
fought with the light's on
We always did it in the dark
Brilliant lines ... Love the word play here.
fought with the light's on
We always did it in the dark
Brilliant lines ... Love the word play here.
1st Aug 2016 2:11pm
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1st Aug 2016 2:15pm
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