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Visage
The second day dawns. I am
willing, but tired, defeated some-
what by a display of upfront
honesty. Beautiful honesty, beautiful
people, were they not so
far away.
Maybe they see something my
shifting eyes cannot in
myself. Those eyes in a
mirror that can only look upon
the skin, but haven't the love of
self to pierce it.
Today, I will sit, and I will
brood, as I do. I will look for the
reasons this honesty was not
deserved, but merely a result of my
misrepresentation. A visage. Skin-
tight, it fits too well. Perhaps if I
stand under running water long
enough, it will wash off. Perhaps.
willing, but tired, defeated some-
what by a display of upfront
honesty. Beautiful honesty, beautiful
people, were they not so
far away.
Maybe they see something my
shifting eyes cannot in
myself. Those eyes in a
mirror that can only look upon
the skin, but haven't the love of
self to pierce it.
Today, I will sit, and I will
brood, as I do. I will look for the
reasons this honesty was not
deserved, but merely a result of my
misrepresentation. A visage. Skin-
tight, it fits too well. Perhaps if I
stand under running water long
enough, it will wash off. Perhaps.
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Re. Visage
This is about me, so tired i feel like giving up, I need a shower, brother...
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Re: Re. Visage
29th Jul 2016 11:38am
The road to happiness is not paved with the same stuff, unfortunately. I'm glad you found a connection in this one though. As difficult as it is, we need to keep moving forward. "If you're going through Hell, keep going," I believe Churchill said. Stay strong, brother.
And the humidity is brutal today, I may need a few showers, haha.
And the humidity is brutal today, I may need a few showers, haha.
Re. Visage
29th Jul 2016 11:33am
Re. Visage
29th Jul 2016 11:35am
I knew this poem was for me after reading 3 lines. Both this poem your poem above are my last 18ish hours...
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/245045-rise-up/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/245045-rise-up/
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Re. Visage
29th Jul 2016 11:35am
And Whale wrote me the messenger poem... It bared my soul and deepest kept secrets....
So tired...
So tired...
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Re. Visage
29th Jul 2016 11:54am
I wrote this in my heart as I was getting out of the shower...
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/245058-one-in-the-same/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/245058-one-in-the-same/
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Re. Visage
29th Jul 2016 3:50pm
Perhaps the skin is too tight because it's time to shed...I relate to this very well. Love of others is easy, love of self...that's the trickiest to find. Welcome to DU :)
Willow
Willow
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Re: Re. Visage
29th Jul 2016 3:57pm
I truly hope it will shed on its own, it's a bit suffocating, honestly. Although it may be a matter of doing it myself. The day will come, I'm sure of it. Thank you for the lovely welcome, Willow :)
Re: Re. Visage
29th Jul 2016 4:07pm
Unfortunately, I had to slough mine off inch by agonizing inch. I'm still plucking dried sticking bits off here and there. But the feeling of liberation that follows...indescribable. :)
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Re: Re. Visage
29th Jul 2016 4:49pm
It must be beautiful without your own misconceptions dragging your feet down. I can only hope I'll join you one day in peeling that mask off and being able to appreciate the life I've built :)