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Flare
Come closer, Love
so I can be
little spoon,
soft hand in hollow of hip
seeking out
divine
vibratory warmth
disabling
before I dig in
to your flame,
plunging icy hands
inside your fire,
digits
lacing through vertebrae
looking for the synapse of release
toes
tangling
around misfiring capillaries,
wiring you into my disease
curling us into winter crescents.
so I can be
little spoon,
soft hand in hollow of hip
seeking out
divine
vibratory warmth
disabling
before I dig in
to your flame,
plunging icy hands
inside your fire,
digits
lacing through vertebrae
looking for the synapse of release
toes
tangling
around misfiring capillaries,
wiring you into my disease
curling us into winter crescents.
Published 17th Jul 2016
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17th Jul 2016 6:58am
The entire thing is beautiful, Mabon (Aish). But that last line is breathtaking. I can see the naked bodies, milk white as Winter, curled into each other as two crescents in one.
Carpe,
I wrote this piece back in Nov of 2015, here is the link http://darkstarpoetry.proboards.com/thread/10612/flare
so THANK YOU for finding me a poetry thief.
I am a little tired of being accused of plagiarizing my own work... and since I am not a member of reddit, would someone be so kind as to tell me how to report the person who posted this as their own?
I wrote this piece back in Nov of 2015, here is the link http://darkstarpoetry.proboards.com/thread/10612/flare
so THANK YOU for finding me a poetry thief.
I am a little tired of being accused of plagiarizing my own work... and since I am not a member of reddit, would someone be so kind as to tell me how to report the person who posted this as their own?
17th Jul 2016 12:00pm
Mabon--you'd need to contact the admin at Reddit; unfortunately we are unable to address issues that are posted on sites other than here.
19th Jul 2016 11:29pm
Yes and yes ..
and am liking the flare of
this...its the feeling vibrations
you cast which called me.
Welcome welcome
-Howlings
and am liking the flare of
this...its the feeling vibrations
you cast which called me.
Welcome welcome
-Howlings
13th Jan 2017 5:43am
Thank you very much for reading and commenting, Howling. I am happy the vibes are well received.
