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Seep, Weep, Bleed, (but Be Positive'bout it, damn'it!)
O, the alonesome night,( like/like/like
a damn simile of a)
wound perpetually seeping, weeping,
b l ee d i n g........
nearly a hole century now, y've
d e s e r v ed
no companion
keep tryin to stitch this laceration. Stitch
right down to yr cardiac-heart.
no "luck".......apparently no deservance
hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
2016dkzk//fotoBYdkzk/ "IKnowatcherThinkin,EyeSeeRightThruYe(Ha!)" ////
Published 13th Jul 2016
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13th Jul 2016 4:29am
13th Jul 2016 4:31am
13th Jul 2016 3:41pm
Beautiful metaphor. The imagery of
the lonesome night is marvelous.
No one write like you, Danny.
the lonesome night is marvelous.
No one write like you, Danny.
13th Jul 2016 5:40pm
thank you, dear.......but none but you &a scant few 'precious others'
ever read any --------------
! a truly sad paradoxymoronic eXistential dil'enema!
( dear Me!!!!)
ever read any --------------
! a truly sad paradoxymoronic eXistential dil'enema!
( dear Me!!!!)
13th Jul 2016 6:06pm
14th Jul 2016 3:37am
Quite a few........although i know this(DUP) is kind of a mutual admiration society, i find myself unable to comment on so many due to them being rather limp juvenalia (i should talk, lifelong failure that iyam)....but I do try to make some neutral "write on" commentary.....i just can't sit in front of this screen for more than an hr/90min a day.... & i just cannot make myself "take my internet out" with me via phone & be staring at it all day.......my technology is primitive....i just use cellfone for telefoning & naught else. My phone is (785)220-2644 if ye ever dare. PC an hour or less a day is as far as i can go on this media....& i also have my fotography & music shit to monitor..........whathfck am i blabbin'bout?.....sorry, dear
