My Sky  has  gone  grey, it's blue no more!

Makes me sad, reading this.  I can see the lone swan.  :(
Willow

Hey friend, please don't be sad, it's a work of fiction..wrote what came to mind, sorry it made you sad...

KDAmB

I'm glad it's fiction. Still sad for the Swan. It's a beautiful write for all its sadness ☺

such kind act you are Willows! thank you for your kind words!

Quite a sad piece. Very well written.

Hey Bro, Thanks for stopping by and kind comment, sorry it made you feel sad, just wrote down what came to mind...

Thanks once again!
KDAmB

sad, sad, sad - so cleverly written, such an original rhyming scheme and terminology - like much :-)

I admire your keen and sharp insight and sight Dave! No words enough to thank you my friend!! ☺

Appreciate your kind words!  Always

KDAmB

A work of longing and yerning is how I interpret this I feel it

Thank You Bro for reading and interpreting. Your kind words have always meant a lot!

This made my heart ache.
Such a sad, passionate write.
Beautifully pieced together.

I am sorry it caused pain to your heart, I welcome and Thank you for your generous appreciation and very kind feedback.  This was the second ever ghazal I posted,  though a work of fiction, it came from my heart... Thank you once again!