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A spot of gardening
So much rain and so very little sun.
Therefore, when the sun shines, all is ablaze;
But, while it rained, she had such heated fun
As, in her kitchen, she found many ways
To entertain her master with the wet
And sloppy cunt that he rather enjoys;
She's played with it forever; and is set
On cock and servitude, as master toys
With her whore hole that she's wont to reveal,
Her panties pushed aside and her skirt raised
Let sir fuck hard and let him get the feel
For coming in tightness; as the sun's rays
Shine on the marigolds and the green grass,
Her eyes will shine with tears: sir's in her arse.
Therefore, when the sun shines, all is ablaze;
But, while it rained, she had such heated fun
As, in her kitchen, she found many ways
To entertain her master with the wet
And sloppy cunt that he rather enjoys;
She's played with it forever; and is set
On cock and servitude, as master toys
With her whore hole that she's wont to reveal,
Her panties pushed aside and her skirt raised
Let sir fuck hard and let him get the feel
For coming in tightness; as the sun's rays
Shine on the marigolds and the green grass,
Her eyes will shine with tears: sir's in her arse.
Published 9th Jul 2016
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I love this ....
More people should comment on your incredible erotic writing
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More people should comment on your incredible erotic writing
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Thank you for sharing your enjoyment - I take great pleasure from those who find the time to express their views and try to hone the writing to add to that pleasure.
Perhaps if I were to add some background further interest might ensue:
"There's so much rain" he murmured. "Sir," I said,
Well...interrupted, "I prefer it wet."
A foolish thing to say, and I blushed red
And, as I saw his hard look, I still met
His eye; but tilted my chin to one side
And wondered if he would....perhaps a slap.
Perhaps spanking too.. I gladly sighed.
His hands went to his belt and I thought crap;
As he unbuckled it, while my tongue played
over my lips.- and for a while his smoke
And mirrors kept me quiet as he just laid
Into me firmly - insolence would choke
Another male less worthy than the man
Who I will thank - because we know I can
Or perhaps not
Smiles.
Perhaps if I were to add some background further interest might ensue:
"There's so much rain" he murmured. "Sir," I said,
Well...interrupted, "I prefer it wet."
A foolish thing to say, and I blushed red
And, as I saw his hard look, I still met
His eye; but tilted my chin to one side
And wondered if he would....perhaps a slap.
Perhaps spanking too.. I gladly sighed.
His hands went to his belt and I thought crap;
As he unbuckled it, while my tongue played
over my lips.- and for a while his smoke
And mirrors kept me quiet as he just laid
Into me firmly - insolence would choke
Another male less worthy than the man
Who I will thank - because we know I can
Or perhaps not
Smiles.
9th Jul 2016 6:11pm
Indeed, you deserve the very spanking tendered .....
I'm sure you enjoyed it
I did
I'm sure you enjoyed it
I did
9th Jul 2016 11:45pm
She should be spanked hard, he decrees,
She should be spanked over his knees:
Let slap after slap
Spank her hard on his lap
For being such a naughty tease.
She should be spanked over his knees:
Let slap after slap
Spank her hard on his lap
For being such a naughty tease.
10th Jul 2016 12:18pm
Flogged then fucked and some tender after care for his supreme slave. ...
Repeat
Repeat
10th Jul 2016 1:22pm
Goodness - service seems
to be nothing but "pleasure"
under your control
I do hope that my
"naughty" did not provoke you
I'll upgrade to bad.
to be nothing but "pleasure"
under your control
I do hope that my
"naughty" did not provoke you
I'll upgrade to bad.
10th Jul 2016 3:58pm
Everyone comes at D/s with their own perspective
Mine is pleasure through pain , release and then tenderness
It makes sense to me but .....
Mine is pleasure through pain , release and then tenderness
It makes sense to me but .....
