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No Name, Never Finished it..
As i'm writing these words down i'm not thinking of what's gonna come out next i'm just hoping it will help me make it through the next week because now i'm running on a short fuze that just about anything could cause it to blow maybe i'm just crazy I don't but truth be told i'm feeling life is too cold,
i'm really getting sick and tired of everyone always being on my back matter as fact lets be real about that, people always running there mouth on how I did great at this or that but as soon as I slip up its like all eyes on me, I really can't handle all these expectations i'm not what you think I am, and i'm not playing around, so maybe just lay your expectations down because there causing me to drawn, otherwise you might as well tie and anchor around me and watch me drawn,
i'm tired of always putting up a mask everyday i set out to be who you want me to be afraid i'll disappoint you if you see different and i'm trying my best but it seems like i'm doing my worst so i might as well go a head a say a verse, now it's causing me to fall back, you're someone i always looked up to, though I could be just like you but apparently my effort isn't enough so I gotta act like I got my life together otherwise i’d admit i’m a mess, as soon as my first fault comes even if its something small that makes me a failure, a mistake and you won't hear me or see me through for who I am and where I stand, but if you open up your eyes maybe you'll see i'm still a kid and i'm still learning what I can.
i'm really getting sick and tired of everyone always being on my back matter as fact lets be real about that, people always running there mouth on how I did great at this or that but as soon as I slip up its like all eyes on me, I really can't handle all these expectations i'm not what you think I am, and i'm not playing around, so maybe just lay your expectations down because there causing me to drawn, otherwise you might as well tie and anchor around me and watch me drawn,
i'm tired of always putting up a mask everyday i set out to be who you want me to be afraid i'll disappoint you if you see different and i'm trying my best but it seems like i'm doing my worst so i might as well go a head a say a verse, now it's causing me to fall back, you're someone i always looked up to, though I could be just like you but apparently my effort isn't enough so I gotta act like I got my life together otherwise i’d admit i’m a mess, as soon as my first fault comes even if its something small that makes me a failure, a mistake and you won't hear me or see me through for who I am and where I stand, but if you open up your eyes maybe you'll see i'm still a kid and i'm still learning what I can.
Published 29th Jun 2016
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2nd Jul 2016 4:09am
No expectations can be hard as well, but in some ways easier to overcome. Climbing so high to reach for something then falling short is a long hard fall, especially if there is the sharp Rocks of disappointment waiting at the bottom.
If you're interested in improving the poems layout putting a few spaces between verses would be a good place to start, however it's fine as it is as a piece of expression and release.
Welcome to DU.
If you're interested in improving the poems layout putting a few spaces between verses would be a good place to start, however it's fine as it is as a piece of expression and release.
Welcome to DU.
