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transient
i'm stretched so thin
i'm translucent
that something just off true vision
look at me directly
and i disappear
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Re. transient
Anonymous
24th Jun 2016 9:07am
what an awesome, though heartbreaking, write!
I've missed reading you.
powerful words
I've missed reading you.
powerful words
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Well, I reckon that's an awesome thing to say Miss M. Really. I'm smiling at your visit and words girl. I do thank you. Looking forward to a venture in your direction soon. 😊
p.s just figured out the RL thingy. Lol. Humbled Miss M. Stoked you liked it.
p.s just figured out the RL thingy. Lol. Humbled Miss M. Stoked you liked it.
Re. transient
24th Jun 2016 10:32am
Brilliant! in its universal connection because who amongst us hasn't felt this.
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A big smile to have you at my house LSP.
And you're right. With all of our apparent differences, there's bugger all difference between any of us is there?. Looking forward to heading your way also my friend. Is overdue. Always a chair at mine LSP. Thank you.
And P.s with another thank you for your RL. 😊
And you're right. With all of our apparent differences, there's bugger all difference between any of us is there?. Looking forward to heading your way also my friend. Is overdue. Always a chair at mine LSP. Thank you.
And P.s with another thank you for your RL. 😊
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24th Jun 2016 11:43am
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29th Jun 2016 12:06pm
Here for the long haul I'm hoping Britt. Gonna give it a shot anyway. Lost too much bark gettin' here. Figure I'll stick around and see what happens. Not sure if what what I've got is sanity or not girl, but it seems to be leaking. So get in quick. Lol. Thanks Britt. 😜
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30th Jun 2016 3:00am
Life sucks but what can we do about it us crazy amazing people have to stick together!!
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Re. transient
24th Jun 2016 10:39pm
For me you'll be never transient. Was waiting for you and your poems, Twitch. Good to see you. Btw, deep write, as always.
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29th Jun 2016 12:24pm
My dear Miss Chi,
and I always look forward to being seen by you. You never fail to bring me a smile that goes right to the inside. I will be forever grateful for that and for you lovely lady. Always. Thank you.
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25th Jun 2016 00:33am
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29th Jun 2016 12:30pm
Brother Poe,
your chair is alway free at my place my friend. You guys know how to make a bloke feel some good about himself, hey. I mean that. As alway you're appreciated young man. Read you soon.
your chair is alway free at my place my friend. You guys know how to make a bloke feel some good about himself, hey. I mean that. As alway you're appreciated young man. Read you soon.
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Anonymous
25th Jun 2016 3:21am
Hey Twitch.....always good to see you back.......this is an awesome ink......I know a few who have looked at me......yet never really saw me or got to know me.....thought provoking write.....enjoyed.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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29th Jun 2016 12:35pm
Ah, Flower,
I've only had to read you for a time to know they missed a good thing girl. Reckoning those around ya could probly tell you that lovely. Hope they do. Appreciate you Flower. Thank you.
I've only had to read you for a time to know they missed a good thing girl. Reckoning those around ya could probly tell you that lovely. Hope they do. Appreciate you Flower. Thank you.
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25th Jun 2016 4:02pm
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20th Dec 2016 4:58am
Sadly I believe it's one many of us can relate to SS. Thanks for swinging by. You're appreciated.
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6th Jul 2016 7:20am
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16th Aug 2016 11:48pm
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6th Sep 2016 2:38am
Good to see you over this way Mr D. Don't get around as much as I should. I will head your way soon. Thanks for dropping by and the kind words. Appreciate ya.
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20th Dec 2016 00:42am