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Liebeslied (free verse original)
The nipple, shaped like Erato's grape,
touches your lips, as notes escape
from sweet Kithara's strings
to grace the page, to shimmer and elate.
Clear water trickles down her chest,
kisses smooth skin; it glides and rests
in that small valley just above the nest
where men sink hopes and dreams.
What bittersweet limerence unfolds
in answer to the deep abiding need,
to which the visage of his loved one holds
unbidden and mysterious key.
Published 20th Jun 2016
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20th Jun 2016 11:06pm
Anonymous
21st Jun 2016 00:10am
I prefer this Free Willy version over the sonnet.
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21st Jun 2016 00:40am
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22nd Jun 2016 00:44am
Short but outstanding. Loved the imagery of that 'valley' where men sink their hopes n dreams :)
Anonymous
22nd Jun 2016 11:45am
Had you entered this in Annie's challenge, I would have voted it as Most Erotic. No contest.
22nd Jun 2016 1:46pm
