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All night
Black Sabbath's album heaven and hell
playing in the back ground
By the the time we reached track 3
Our bodied are all beaded up with sweat
You're laying on my bed
Your wavy mane on my pillow
And I am riding you
Your hands on my hips
Raising yours to deepen our thrusts
Filling my valley
I only have you for the night
So we do it all
From passionate love making
To down and dirty fucking
Hours long
Song after song
Because you have to go before dawns light
There will be no sleeping tonight
playing in the back ground
By the the time we reached track 3
Our bodied are all beaded up with sweat
You're laying on my bed
Your wavy mane on my pillow
And I am riding you
Your hands on my hips
Raising yours to deepen our thrusts
Filling my valley
I only have you for the night
So we do it all
From passionate love making
To down and dirty fucking
Hours long
Song after song
Because you have to go before dawns light
There will be no sleeping tonight
Published 8th Jun 2016
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9th Jun 2016 6:20am
Brings back very found memories of my youth. Just out of high school, I was a young man really full of myself. But a girl a bit older, humbled me, She informed me that I was not the best lover. But thankfully she didn't dump me. Instead, she made what was called, 'a mixed tape,' on tape deck cassette. She used it to pace our love making. First few songs were kissing. Next couple, were for heavy petting. Then the next few were for fore sex play. Last song, was to take it on home too; Bee Gees 'Staying Alive.'
Every young man should have a lover such as her. But I BS too much.
Great poem Luna.
Every young man should have a lover such as her. But I BS too much.
Great poem Luna.
9th Jun 2016 10:59am
And I am riding you
THAT'S what all women love to do CONTROL his ejaculation till she orgasms
women teach most as men over their swoooshhes have no control till the next 20 or 30 or60 mnutes wait till it stands up again and so again and again we all cummm in all valleys up and down then the night has been totally fucked as every drop of juice from her and you is finally sucked now you are a desert fuck t get it up!
THAT'S what all women love to do CONTROL his ejaculation till she orgasms
women teach most as men over their swoooshhes have no control till the next 20 or 30 or60 mnutes wait till it stands up again and so again and again we all cummm in all valleys up and down then the night has been totally fucked as every drop of juice from her and you is finally sucked now you are a desert fuck t get it up!
9th Jun 2016 1:56pm
