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Not words
There are words
that are
not words
they are just but symbols
of a meaning
that brings upon
a hidden feeling
that cannot be
described
that are
not words
they are just but symbols
of a meaning
that brings upon
a hidden feeling
that cannot be
described
Published 8th Jun 2016
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8th Jun 2016 4:02pm
I really like this. I think if it were me, I would drop the word "just..." and let it read more smoothly. But I could be reading it wrong. And I hate telling another artist how to create. I really like this though! It's simple and solid. :)
Willow
Willow
9th Jun 2016 7:23am
