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Storming Luv
tears fill my eyes as the storm passes
amazing impact you are upon my soul
feeling you always in the midst of me
do you feel me thru the storm of you
as my sprit swirls in the whispering winds
wrapping you in hugs as it whispers my name
when you looked upon the blackened sky
did you see stars shinning like prisms in the night
reflecting from my tears of missing you
each one a wet kiss from your lips
soaking thru me like kisses in the rain
feeling the warmth of you deep within me
Feeling you always my sweet Bee xoxoxoxoxo :)
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
amazing impact you are upon my soul
feeling you always in the midst of me
do you feel me thru the storm of you
as my sprit swirls in the whispering winds
wrapping you in hugs as it whispers my name
when you looked upon the blackened sky
did you see stars shinning like prisms in the night
reflecting from my tears of missing you
each one a wet kiss from your lips
soaking thru me like kisses in the rain
feeling the warmth of you deep within me
Feeling you always my sweet Bee xoxoxoxoxo :)
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
Published 6th Jun 2016
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6th Jun 2016 3:25am
"Each one a wet kiss from your lips
Soaking through me like kisses in the rain"
Beautiful imagery! :)
Willow
Soaking through me like kisses in the rain"
Beautiful imagery! :)
Willow
7th Jun 2016 3:35am
Hey Willow.......I'm so glad you visited my page.......happy you enjoyed this......thank you for your kindness......purple smiles & hugs xo :)
6th Jun 2016 3:37am
Tears of longing... you need to hold your memories close to ease the missing in parted times...
A lovely write G! JJ
A lovely write G! JJ
7th Jun 2016 3:40am
Yes JJ.....I cuddle to words and memories in the times we are seperated......He might be an ocean away but I never feel him too far away......appreciate your words of comfort......thank you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
6th Jun 2016 2:20pm
Flower you truly have a heart as big as an ocean... Sweetly expressed this was :)
7th Jun 2016 3:44am
Poet how you make me smile with your visit.......thank you my blessed friend.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
6th Jun 2016 2:32pm
Ahhh , , , There is nothing quite like unburdening yourself.
Each line was a stand alone passionate entreaty to a lost love . . .
Each line was a stand alone passionate entreaty to a lost love . . .
7th Jun 2016 3:51am
Hey SG......you put a spin on my words......saw it a different way......I luv that......thank you for making me feel it differently.......you're awesome!! Purple luv & hugs xo :)
6th Jun 2016 4:45pm
this ink is absolutely beautiful flower... no other writes like this gem :)
7th Jun 2016 3:53am
Hi Magic......thrilled to you smiling upon my ink again.......thank you my friend for making me smile ......purple luv & hugs xo :)
6th Jun 2016 5:00pm
7th Jun 2016 4:12am
Precious Crim.....it's always a treat for me to see your smile gleaming upon my ink.......thank you for sharing the feelings......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
7th Jun 2016 1:17am
Flowergirl you make me smile.🌼💫
7th Jun 2016 4:21am
Hey Mom......I'm glad I make you smile......that makes me very happy.....appreciate you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
7th Jun 2016 10:05pm
8th Jun 2016 2:12am
Hey 2b.......I'm thirlled my ink touches you......I luv writing......thank you for taking time to stop by......purple smiles & hugs xo :)
8th Jun 2016 00:35am
If anyone can calm a storm it's you, Flower.
"do you feel me thru the storm of you
as my sprit swirls in the whispering winds
wrapping you in hugs as it whispers my name"
Mysterious, turbulent but tender. Yes, I can barely hear them, but sounds like the winds are saying "Flower." Fine work luvly!
"do you feel me thru the storm of you
as my sprit swirls in the whispering winds
wrapping you in hugs as it whispers my name"
Mysterious, turbulent but tender. Yes, I can barely hear them, but sounds like the winds are saying "Flower." Fine work luvly!
8th Jun 2016 2:48am
Hey Crow......as usual your words make me smile......storms are calming to me in way they never were......I luv closing my eyes and hearing the whispers of the wind......it really has a calming effect on me......appreciate you much.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
9th Jun 2016 3:07am
Beautiful Sun Kissed, again you bring us into your world with such clarity we walk within it right next to you...beautifully done as always...I look forward to being a part of your travels each time I read you...With love - Sweet S xo :)
10th Jun 2016 5:43pm
Awe Sweet S......I humbling hug and send you luv......im always so thrilled when you smile upon my ink.....you always leave "warm fuzzies" as you say.......thank you for walking beside me.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
