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Come inside
Come inside baby...boy...
Shake my bed
And body..
With tongue tracing taboo sweet
Sticky
wet lines to be crossed...
Inhibitions fed to your monsters...
Demons that gnaw on the bones of innocent thought...
And gnaw to my grind ..
And then you in mouth
Deep
Teeth to balls
Until you...
Call out my name howling
And you baby...
Come inside...
Shake my bed
And body..
Rolling...
Rock hard fuck me rough
While deep red claws pull
In your quiver
Dick tremble and ass clench
I drench from the look in your wild eye...boy.
Tongue trace lick wet till i shiver..
And shake..
My bed baby...
Come inside ....
Gonna be quite the ride...baby...boy...
Shake my bed
And body..
With tongue tracing taboo sweet
Sticky
wet lines to be crossed...
Inhibitions fed to your monsters...
Demons that gnaw on the bones of innocent thought...
And gnaw to my grind ..
And then you in mouth
Deep
Teeth to balls
Until you...
Call out my name howling
And you baby...
Come inside...
Shake my bed
And body..
Rolling...
Rock hard fuck me rough
While deep red claws pull
In your quiver
Dick tremble and ass clench
I drench from the look in your wild eye...boy.
Tongue trace lick wet till i shiver..
And shake..
My bed baby...
Come inside ....
Gonna be quite the ride...baby...boy...
Published 3rd Jun 2016
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4th Jun 2016 4:29am
Salute! A pleasurable poem, but I was waiting for more loosening of inhibitions for both sides.
Things are going well at the restaurant despite my having been 86d out of my own restaurant for Nose Delights and Shoe Caverns. The latter particularly drew a total no response. What in hell is wrong with getting a gigantic buzz out of smelling a woman's shoe??? Where O where are the fetish minded?
I'm sure folks miss YOUR derring-do, your brilliant inventions and flouting of conventions that put one in mind of Rabelais, one of the greatest erotic writers ever!
Things are going well at the restaurant despite my having been 86d out of my own restaurant for Nose Delights and Shoe Caverns. The latter particularly drew a total no response. What in hell is wrong with getting a gigantic buzz out of smelling a woman's shoe??? Where O where are the fetish minded?
I'm sure folks miss YOUR derring-do, your brilliant inventions and flouting of conventions that put one in mind of Rabelais, one of the greatest erotic writers ever!
4th Jun 2016 8:24pm
Lol...God love ya Candy Man...
I am heading towards LA soon it seems...I hope to visit Erotic Haiku!! And see with my own eyes your shoe sniffin self....
And agreed about the piece...
I will talk to you 'for i leave....It would be a dream to meet you in person and raise a glass with your lusty patrons...💋💋
I am heading towards LA soon it seems...I hope to visit Erotic Haiku!! And see with my own eyes your shoe sniffin self....
And agreed about the piece...
I will talk to you 'for i leave....It would be a dream to meet you in person and raise a glass with your lusty patrons...💋💋
5th Jun 2016 9:53pm
I'm no baby but I'm always up for a ride sweet Jen. I like this one's ferocity:
"Rock hard fuck me rough
While deep red claws pull
In your quiver
Dick tremble and ass clench
I drench from the look in your wild eye...boy."
You certainly got a tremble our of mine. Excellent work!
"Rock hard fuck me rough
While deep red claws pull
In your quiver
Dick tremble and ass clench
I drench from the look in your wild eye...boy."
You certainly got a tremble our of mine. Excellent work!
6th Jun 2016 2:59am
Oh Crow..i love gettin a rise outta you! Loo...thank you my darlin...miss you.
Love always
Jen
Love always
Jen
