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"Trigger"
I saw you
I saw you with her again
Hugging her
Kissing her
I want to confront you
I want to slap you
I want to kill you both
You and my best friend
You're still cheating on me
Both of you lied to me
I chose to go back home
Lock myself in my room
And cry............
I heard a tiny voice
I walked through my cabinet
I opened my drawer
And found my gun
I checked if there's a bullet
Lucky...
I held the gun
Put it on my head...
1
2
3
Pulled the trigger...
BANG!!!!!!
I saw my dead body on the floor
I love my life, more than you...
Thank god...
It was a dream...
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Published 31st May 2016
| Edited 2nd Jun 2016
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31st May 2016 3:51pm
1st Jun 2016 5:44am
31st May 2016 3:56pm
1st Jun 2016 5:45am
Anonymous
- Edited 1st Jun 2016 00:47am
1st Jun 2016 00:11am
Yes, to feel this angry, this jealous is really quite scary. Dreams can be an extension of what's eating away at us in everyday life. I too like the layout, the gaps between the stanzas help to build the suspense here. We all have our emotional triggers I suppose.
1st Jun 2016 5:49am
A nightmare that triggers me
To wake up with that dream
Thank u for ur c0ment...
To wake up with that dream
Thank u for ur c0ment...
2nd Jun 2016 1:30am
It was a very catching poem since the start, I put myself in your shoes (even though it's not the same). Very deep and a lot of suspense.
2nd Jun 2016 6:16am
