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'Hemophilic'
The mirrors of yesterday
haggardly, harass the mind...
Lost like the petals
of a flower to time...
Still...who can hear the cries
of a needful heart?
he had battled the barriers
n' tore her walls apart...
They were mere slivers
flowin' within the breeze
yet, infinite felt the love
that set his heart at ease...
Alas, as always a symptom
of the aid the heals the ail
Once the shell exposes
it's 'tender hide' the fallacy
of love he sees, often progresses
to fail...
haggardly, harass the mind...
Lost like the petals
of a flower to time...
Still...who can hear the cries
of a needful heart?
he had battled the barriers
n' tore her walls apart...
They were mere slivers
flowin' within the breeze
yet, infinite felt the love
that set his heart at ease...
Alas, as always a symptom
of the aid the heals the ail
Once the shell exposes
it's 'tender hide' the fallacy
of love he sees, often progresses
to fail...
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Re. 'Hemophilic'
Anonymous
29th May 2016 3:28pm
beautiful and sad, excellent pen.
:)
:)
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29th May 2016 9:23pm
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29th May 2016 7:35pm
This, Poetik, is a profound
contribution from your pen.
"Lost like the petals
of a flower to time"...
It's sad how over time, like
the Beauty of a flowers petals,
things lose their shine.
You have the wisdom of an
aged sage Brother.
Dantalyon
contribution from your pen.
"Lost like the petals
of a flower to time"...
It's sad how over time, like
the Beauty of a flowers petals,
things lose their shine.
You have the wisdom of an
aged sage Brother.
Dantalyon
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29th May 2016 9:28pm
Thanks so much, that was awful kind of you to say bro! Appreciate you much :)
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Anonymous
29th May 2016 9:27pm
Flawless, this just rolls down so smoothly, not to mention you got some beautiful quotable lines in here PIKM, Bravo!
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29th May 2016 9:34pm
Aaawww there that beauty is, making me blush n whatnot :) truly, grateful for you continued support my dear lady :)
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Anonymous
30th May 2016 2:27am
PM! The flow in this is perfection as Vee stated and these lines captured me as I gasped breath...
"Still...who can hear the cries
of a needful heart?
he had battled the barriers
n' tore her walls apart...
They were mere slivers
flowin' within the breeze
yet, infinite felt the love
that set his heart at ease..."
~ loved this....take a bow!
With love - Taryn xoxo
"Still...who can hear the cries
of a needful heart?
he had battled the barriers
n' tore her walls apart...
They were mere slivers
flowin' within the breeze
yet, infinite felt the love
that set his heart at ease..."
~ loved this....take a bow!
With love - Taryn xoxo
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Re. 'Hemophilic'
30th May 2016 2:43am
Taryn you sweet sweet woman I adore you!
Thank you dooooo much I'm deeply honored :)
Thank you dooooo much I'm deeply honored :)
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Anonymous
30th May 2016 1:35pm
And they say: time heals all things"
I wander sometimes to find the
place where this miracle prevail.
Any idea?
-
I wander sometimes to find the
place where this miracle prevail.
Any idea?
-
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30th May 2016 5:21pm
Yea they do don't they? Uhm nah I haven't a clue, but I'll make you a deal, if I find it I'll tell u n if you find it you tell me k? :) thank you a bunch sweetie :)
Re. 'Hemophilic'
30th May 2016 5:27pm
"The mirrors of yesterday
haggardly, harass the mind...
Lost like the petals
of a flower to time..."
ah Poe could read you all day long my friend..
so much wisdom gained from your poignant inking..
love Crim
haggardly, harass the mind...
Lost like the petals
of a flower to time..."
ah Poe could read you all day long my friend..
so much wisdom gained from your poignant inking..
love Crim
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1st Jun 2016 2:07pm
Thank u my sweet Crim, that makes me blush big time :) truly grateful to you, n for you...always :)
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30th May 2016 8:57pm
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31st May 2016 00:24am
Thank you sweetness as always I treasure u, n I'm deeply grateful for your time n thoughts :)
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31st May 2016 3:17pm
Once the shell exposes
it's 'tender hide' the fallacy
of love he sees, often progresses
to fail...
...
Heavy drop my brotha..
No words needed after this.
You pushin that pen for sure.
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2nd Jun 2016 4:56am
I've never known a break up that was beautiful... But your praise sure was :)
Thank u my dearest :)
Thank u my dearest :)
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Anonymous
5th Jun 2016 1:56am
Oh Poet.......this made my heart bleed a tear.......I was feelng emotions being here earlier when a certain soul was on......your write drew my tears......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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5th Jun 2016 10:52pm
Aaaawww I'm sorry sweetie, didn't mean to cause u to cry... But I'm happy you were touched :)
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So many wonderful lines Poe... truly a beautiful write that touched my emotions.
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24th Jun 2016 1:20pm
Sorry somehow I missed this comment. :( but I thank you greatly n deeply appreciate you always my sweetness :)
Re. 'Hemophilic'
8th Jun 2016 9:37pm
great here inkage my brotha... with that wisdom it'll make you stronger... hope all is well bruh *fist bump*
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9th Jun 2016 1:20am
Thanks bro. But you know how it goes... The heart always seems to be conflict with the mind. Appreciate you much n yea I'm as well as can be expected. :) peace n love to you n yours *fist bump*
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