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Who was the tin man?
lone he stood, with words in his hand
a journal of secrets, this tin woodman
some would say he had an ax to grind
but he chopped trees for paper :) at least in my mind
I was traveling thru a world that had become a wasteland
when i stumbled upon this empty shell of man
stuck,frozen, broken and hollow his edges rusted
life had beat him down til he was disgusted
once his world was colorful and bright
and each day love bloomed in gardens of insight
but now its cold and no flowers bloom
it rains all November and snows in June
constant memories linger over him like a dark cloud
he bares the rain,never to love again is what he vowed
circumstances left him hopeless, he forgotten how to smile
how to feel,how to love, tho he think of it every once in a while
he would get real quiet,strain and listen for the sound
that old familiar tapping of a heart that use to pound
but all he heard was echos of lost love and woeful cries
life had left him heartless, but isn't that where compassion lie
In the void of empty, the valley of hurt
love plants a seed deep down in the dirt
and i wonder is it possible to love a tinman
can the kindness i show him assure him its ok to feel again
if i give him my heart so his chest feels what mines feel within
and offer a crucible of passion for him to melt in
we could share my heart,in a lifetime of warm embraces
neither of us void,love can fill all empty spaces
a journal of secrets, this tin woodman
some would say he had an ax to grind
but he chopped trees for paper :) at least in my mind
I was traveling thru a world that had become a wasteland
when i stumbled upon this empty shell of man
stuck,frozen, broken and hollow his edges rusted
life had beat him down til he was disgusted
once his world was colorful and bright
and each day love bloomed in gardens of insight
but now its cold and no flowers bloom
it rains all November and snows in June
constant memories linger over him like a dark cloud
he bares the rain,never to love again is what he vowed
circumstances left him hopeless, he forgotten how to smile
how to feel,how to love, tho he think of it every once in a while
he would get real quiet,strain and listen for the sound
that old familiar tapping of a heart that use to pound
but all he heard was echos of lost love and woeful cries
life had left him heartless, but isn't that where compassion lie
In the void of empty, the valley of hurt
love plants a seed deep down in the dirt
and i wonder is it possible to love a tinman
can the kindness i show him assure him its ok to feel again
if i give him my heart so his chest feels what mines feel within
and offer a crucible of passion for him to melt in
we could share my heart,in a lifetime of warm embraces
neither of us void,love can fill all empty spaces
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