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Yes...PLEASE...
Kiss me...
soft, long, passionately,
make it all go away...
Shatter the myth of
they all leave I'm wearin'
by lovin' me in every way...
Clutch my body tight
feel the symbiotic,
syncopation, inspissate
the bond of our molten flesh...
Release me...
free the fuel that boils
within my loins, the ache
for mutual entanglement
to acquiesce freedom's request...
Kiss me...
please, over n' over
n' let's become an ocean
of orgasmic eruptions
created from that kiss
which bore the soul's motion...
Published 20th May 2016
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20th May 2016 1:47pm
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20th May 2016 3:13pm
Lol yea... Thank you my brotha, you're the best kid... oh hey speaking of best
Have you seen the Civil War movie yet!?
Have you seen the Civil War movie yet!?
20th May 2016 7:06pm
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20th May 2016 5:57pm
oh myyyy this is hotter than hell.
I'm glad you showed me the way to this poem, i totally missed it Poe.
When i say you're multi talented, i mean it..completely!
I'm glad you showed me the way to this poem, i totally missed it Poe.
When i say you're multi talented, i mean it..completely!
20th May 2016 6:05pm
Aaaawwww...thank you my sweet baby! Funny u say that becuz in this very moment I'm teaching myself animation, so I can make a short movie based on the characters in my book, The FL. lol truly appreciate u so very much :) muah! lol
20th May 2016 8:02pm
Mmm, yes, please indeed!
"... an ocean of orgasmic eruptions..."
I remember this happened to me one night. Oh, if only time travel were possible, I'd keep going back to that night.
"... an ocean of orgasmic eruptions..."
I remember this happened to me one night. Oh, if only time travel were possible, I'd keep going back to that night.
Wow ur lucky to have had such a tremendous experience! lol thank u sooooo much I'm honored :)
Anonymous
20th May 2016 8:19pm
[Clutch my body tight
feel the symbiotic,
syncopation, inspissate
the bond of our molten flesh...
Release me...
free the fuel that boils
within my loins, the ache
for mutual entanglement
to acquiesce freedom's request... ]
Takes the airs away.
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20th May 2016 8:37pm
Anonymous
21st May 2016 3:36pm
Brother.... slightly aroused lol... in an intellectual sort of way BIG LOL
"Clutch my body tight
feel the symbiotic,
syncopation, inspissate
the bond of our molten flesh... "
Dude!!!! love this
"Clutch my body tight
feel the symbiotic,
syncopation, inspissate
the bond of our molten flesh... "
Dude!!!! love this
21st May 2016 8:43pm
Lol...dagg bro. Thanks a ton, greatly humbled, truly appreciate your support. N it's ok if u were only 'slightly' aroused, I'm good with that lol
Anonymous
21st May 2016 10:22pm
ok than.... now all the way brother lol
21st May 2016 10:30pm
24th May 2016 2:12am
Oh Poet.......this is so commandingly sexy......I can hear the Jeanie in the bottle saying yes yes......I will grant it all to you.....mmmmmm....luv this......purple luv & hugs xo :)
21st Jun 2016 9:47am
Oh sweet flower, I'm sorry I missed replying til now! But I do thank u very much n truly appreciate your support :)
24th May 2016 9:20am
oooh Papi this is such an inviting bit of writing...
... where do i lay it on ya?
... where do i lay it on ya?
24th May 2016 11:22am
Aaawww... Well let's start with the fact that you look tired from standing all day, so here... Cum n sit on my face lol... Thank you my beauty, deeply grateful always :)
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27th May 2016 1:29am
Anonymous
8th Jun 2016 1:32am
Mmmmm...breathtaking...I don't have the words...simply breathtaking. This bit resonates with me...
"Shatter the myth of
they all leave I'm wearin'
by lovin' me in every way"
Timid 😉
"Shatter the myth of
they all leave I'm wearin'
by lovin' me in every way"
Timid 😉
8th Jun 2016 2:29am
Wow... U just took MY breath away! Thank u so very much :) truly appreciate your words n time :)
Anonymous
21st Jun 2016 00:17am
PM!!!! How in the hell did I miss this?? My deepest apologies my friend! These lines are breathtaking...
"Clutch my body tight
feel the symbiotic,
syncopation, inspissate
the bond of our molten flesh...
Release me...
free the fuel that boils
within my loins, the ache
for mutual entanglement
to acquiesce freedom's request..."
~ Taryn xoxo
"Clutch my body tight
feel the symbiotic,
syncopation, inspissate
the bond of our molten flesh...
Release me...
free the fuel that boils
within my loins, the ache
for mutual entanglement
to acquiesce freedom's request..."
~ Taryn xoxo
21st Jun 2016 9:50am
It's OK sweetie, understand completely.
Happy you enjoyed it n sorry bout the 'breath' taking! Lmao ;)
Happy you enjoyed it n sorry bout the 'breath' taking! Lmao ;)
Anonymous
27th Jun 2016 9:15am
That was... wow. You sure know how to make it seem... More than I'd think a kiss would do... Awesome.
27th Jun 2016 11:21am
Aaaawww... Well that's becuz I will do far more than a kiss lol... Truly humbled by your praise, thank you kindly. :)
12th Jul 2016 4:17pm
"Release me...
free the fuel that boils
within my loins"
My Gosh! This entire piece is so seductive, but this line right here...all I could say was yes, please!
free the fuel that boils
within my loins"
My Gosh! This entire piece is so seductive, but this line right here...all I could say was yes, please!
12th Jul 2016 4:26pm
Aaaawwww... Well all I can say is: "your wish is my command" lol
Thank you so much :)
Thank you so much :)
