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what to do
You know the feeling when you lie in bed and your head goes a million different directions
I need the comfort
A blanket the fan
Does he love me
Does he care
Are these just words he says
My guard is wearing thin
The sweetness of the words
Has me wrapped tight
I dont have the strength to fight
Is it safe to give in
Fall into you
Or will I just continue falling
Please tell me what to do
I need the comfort
A blanket the fan
Does he love me
Does he care
Are these just words he says
My guard is wearing thin
The sweetness of the words
Has me wrapped tight
I dont have the strength to fight
Is it safe to give in
Fall into you
Or will I just continue falling
Please tell me what to do
Published 20th May 2016
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20th May 2016 00:16am
life is for living...not watching from the sidelines...sometimes we get hurt but that is the price we pay...
20th May 2016 2:27am
20th May 2016 3:35am
20th May 2016 7:11am
I think he means jump and take the chance either you'll fall and find the right guy or you'll end up amongst the stars...either way it's a good view.
As for your poem great job capturing your emotions and struggle in poetry
As for your poem great job capturing your emotions and struggle in poetry
20th May 2016 7:29am
