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Battle between Heart n Mind, almost like Good n Evil...
When those voices
stated in your head
Don’t go listening
'bout what your ole heart said
When your heart
started dominating your mind
Broken dreams
to a painful path you’d find
To feel nothing…
thoughts tell you
Heart screaming
"That's not possible to do
If You believe... there’s a way"
your mind overruled
Emotional heart,
so sad you keep getting schooled
thought she was different, damn fool
Nothing you do
can bring to life your fairytale...
Heart..you’re sentenced
to life in jail
Flying high, for a time
you did soar...
Stupid!, mind told you to close the door!
Heart never learn,
easy- open like 'twist top'
Thoughts' incessantly whispered… stop, stop, stop!!
Now it’s a mess
you've already confessed
Cursed for your love
wretched heart's a total mess
Constant battle...weak, in the chest
Mind can’t be any better too thoughts, go die in pieces...rest
Turmoil I see you found me
but leave me be I’m begging
Once more, been caring
too much and hurting my
tattered heart once again...
stated in your head
Don’t go listening
'bout what your ole heart said
When your heart
started dominating your mind
Broken dreams
to a painful path you’d find
To feel nothing…
thoughts tell you
Heart screaming
"That's not possible to do
If You believe... there’s a way"
your mind overruled
Emotional heart,
so sad you keep getting schooled
thought she was different, damn fool
Nothing you do
can bring to life your fairytale...
Heart..you’re sentenced
to life in jail
Flying high, for a time
you did soar...
Stupid!, mind told you to close the door!
Heart never learn,
easy- open like 'twist top'
Thoughts' incessantly whispered… stop, stop, stop!!
Now it’s a mess
you've already confessed
Cursed for your love
wretched heart's a total mess
Constant battle...weak, in the chest
Mind can’t be any better too thoughts, go die in pieces...rest
Turmoil I see you found me
but leave me be I’m begging
Once more, been caring
too much and hurting my
tattered heart once again...
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Re. Battle between Heart n Mind, almost like Good n Evil...
19th May 2016 6:56pm
Poe feeling the turmoil of this write could easily take the wisdom from it and apply it to me..
thank you..
love Crim
thank you..
love Crim
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Re: Re. Battle between Heart n Mind, almost like Good n Evil...
19th May 2016 7:02pm
Re. Battle between Heart n Mind, almost like Good n Evil...
19th May 2016 7:13pm
lovin the jaggedness of this vibe bro..
very different approach you used here
..very rhapsodic..
Nothing you do
can bring to life your fairytale.
bong!!!!!
nail on the h-zead
powerful piece indeed!!!
very different approach you used here
..very rhapsodic..
Nothing you do
can bring to life your fairytale.
bong!!!!!
nail on the h-zead
powerful piece indeed!!!
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Re: Re. Battle between Heart n Mind, almost like Good n Evil...
19th May 2016 7:21pm
Yea... Kinda had myself in some kinda a way, truly aggravating
havin thoughts of what we 'wish' n what our realities are... thanks a bunch bro. Much love n peace to u n urs
havin thoughts of what we 'wish' n what our realities are... thanks a bunch bro. Much love n peace to u n urs
Re. Battle between Heart n Mind, almost like Good n Evil...
Anonymous
19th May 2016 7:34pm
You just plucked every ill
chord of my spine
Damn youre dopery! Hmmm
chord of my spine
Damn youre dopery! Hmmm

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Re: Re. Battle between Heart n Mind, almost like Good n Evil...
19th May 2016 7:51pm
"Dopery??" Lol like as in I'm
drugged up? lol not that I wouldn't mind a fatty to burn lol... Thank you my sweetheart, u rock always :)
drugged up? lol not that I wouldn't mind a fatty to burn lol... Thank you my sweetheart, u rock always :)
Re: Re. Battle between Heart n Mind, almost like Good n Evil...
Anonymous
19th May 2016 7:59pm
I meant (damn your dopery) lol.
you have me all ovver the place
..thinking and feeling too much
and yeah youre dopery ;) I think
youre yearning a raw gritty reply
though hearts may gaped but shall
be mended
you have me all ovver the place
..thinking and feeling too much
and yeah youre dopery ;) I think
youre yearning a raw gritty reply
though hearts may gaped but shall
be mended

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Re. Battle between Heart n Mind, almost like Good n Evil...
19th May 2016 7:35pm
"Nothing you do
can bring to life your fairytale... "
Yeah man, don't I know it! Good piece Poe
really feeling this one.
Red
can bring to life your fairytale... "
Yeah man, don't I know it! Good piece Poe
really feeling this one.
Red
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Re: Re. Battle between Heart n Mind, almost like Good n Evil...
22nd May 2016 10:40am
Yea, wanting it n knowing the reality of are two vastly different things for sure... Thanks Gypsy grateful to you always.
Re. Battle between Heart n Mind, almost like Good n Evil...
20th May 2016 1:21am
Our heart never learns the lesson until our mind make us study the subject...and finally learn from it.
*when tests become testimonies*
This is drenched in emotions, Rich. Love it!
*when tests become testimonies*
This is drenched in emotions, Rich. Love it!
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Re: Re. Battle between Heart n Mind, almost like Good n Evil...
20th May 2016 2:35am
Yea I agree to a point BUT as you well know the kind can play tricks on us too... Thank you my sweetest Rain beauty, u are treasured :)
Re. Battle between Heart n Mind, almost like Good n Evil...
20th May 2016 2:24am
Yup, do you follow your head or your heart? A question I've often asked of myself, a conundrum. I feel you Poe.
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Re: Re. Battle between Heart n Mind, almost like Good n Evil...
20th May 2016 2:37am
Sure you're right, for me I'm always the fool... My heart holds dominion
over my head... Thank u sweetie
over my head... Thank u sweetie
Re. Battle between Heart n Mind, almost like Good n Evil...
22nd May 2016 7:16am
Poetik, this skrybe flowed-out of you
with overwhelming depth and passion.
The place you're coming from is passed
from you unto to us like spirit.
An atmospheric write Brother.
I think that the heart and mind are like
embittered enemies that can never be
reconciled.
Dantalyon
with overwhelming depth and passion.
The place you're coming from is passed
from you unto to us like spirit.
An atmospheric write Brother.
I think that the heart and mind are like
embittered enemies that can never be
reconciled.
Dantalyon
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Re. Battle between Heart n Mind, almost like Good n Evil...
22nd May 2016 10:48am
Absolutely agree! Yea you more than most can truly go into your depths n conjure some truly emotional, shattering ink bro. So I'm not surprised this resonated with you, but I do greatly appreciate n thank u for both the RL list add n your support always :)
Re. Battle between Heart n Mind, almost like Good n Evil...
27th May 2016 00:26am
this was full of heart wrenching emotions !!!can relate to this more than you'll ever know..that feeling of catch 22,that eternal tug of war,that leaves you torn
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Re: Re. Battle between Heart n Mind, almost like Good n Evil...
27th May 2016 4:23am
Well you know I'm always feeling that tug... Thank you my dearest... Appreciate u :)
Re. Battle between Heart n Mind, almost like Good n Evil...
5th Jun 2016 11:15pm
loved the last line that slammed dunked this work for me, love what you do! curtsy bow
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Re. Battle between Heart n Mind, almost like Good n Evil...
6th Jun 2016 00:05am
Oh my sweet lady, u make my heart flutter... Thank u so very much for all your wonderful support :)
Re. Battle between Heart n Mind, almost like Good n Evil...
9th Jun 2016 4:56pm
Ahh, the eternal internal battle we wage. I feel this one to the core of me... So well expressed
Willow
Willow
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Re. Battle between Heart n Mind, almost like Good n Evil...
10th Jun 2016 10:34pm
That damn heart boy I tell you gets you into things that your mind knows what the outcome will be..... ....and the battle rages on... Raw emotions, you know I love those lol...
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
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Re: Re. Battle between Heart n Mind, almost like Good n Evil...
10th Jun 2016 10:37pm
Yes, yes, n yes... N thank you my dear, so grateful for your time n thoughts sweetheart :)