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PROMISE
(an erotic Sonnet)
I promise to be here when you wake up,
Anticipating touch throughout the night,
Reflecting on those times when you'd erupt,
When bringing your desire to its height.
And just as generous my wants attend,
Your seek and ministrations take me there,
In rise and arch and tremble's coming bend,
As peaks and throaty serenades declare.
The musk of bodies' reaching in their flux,
The perfumed scent that wafts into the mind,
The tastes from deepest tongue, a delving suck,
My naked spread to enter from behind.
At last you stir as night begins to yield,
To taste your throb, my hand about to wield.
Copyright ©2016 Jade Pandora. All Rights Reserved
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I promise to be here when you wake up,
Anticipating touch throughout the night,
Reflecting on those times when you'd erupt,
When bringing your desire to its height.
And just as generous my wants attend,
Your seek and ministrations take me there,
In rise and arch and tremble's coming bend,
As peaks and throaty serenades declare.
The musk of bodies' reaching in their flux,
The perfumed scent that wafts into the mind,
The tastes from deepest tongue, a delving suck,
My naked spread to enter from behind.
At last you stir as night begins to yield,
To taste your throb, my hand about to wield.
Copyright ©2016 Jade Pandora. All Rights Reserved
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Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 17th May 2016
| Edited 14th Jun 2016
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17th May 2016 10:59am
Re. PROMISE
17th May 2016 11:52am
The musk of bodies' reaching in their flux,
The perfumed scent that wafts into the mind,
The tastes from deepest tongue, a delving suck,
My naked spread to enter from behind.
[ 💥8^O
Excellent write Jade... my Reading List will never be the same...
geoff
The perfumed scent that wafts into the mind,
The tastes from deepest tongue, a delving suck,
My naked spread to enter from behind.
[ 💥8^O
Excellent write Jade... my Reading List will never be the same...
geoff
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17th May 2016 12:13pm
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18th May 2016 2:06am
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Anonymous
17th May 2016 1:23pm
Far from course ,this sonnet so gentle
"To taste your throb, my hand about to wield."
One lucky guy starts the day with a "bang!"
Wonderfully written
"To taste your throb, my hand about to wield."
One lucky guy starts the day with a "bang!"
Wonderfully written
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18th May 2016 2:19am
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18th May 2016 00:11am
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18th May 2016 7:42am
A difficult form mastered as well as the truly great poets past and present.
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18th May 2016 7:52am
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14th Jun 2016 00:16am
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14th Jun 2016 00:36am