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My Body of Ink
My pearly white skin bears no colorful stain
Not one drop of dye will drown my membrane with pain
The ink in my verse colors my sheath in metaphors
Each time I read out at open mic poetry nights
My body of art adorns a canvas of sound
And on pages from trees that surrendered their lives
Saving my bark from branding with a permanent mark
My personal choice means after death I'll still have a voice
Then when my poems are read I am resurrected
As my rainbow of rhyme survives chiseled in time
Not one drop of dye will drown my membrane with pain
The ink in my verse colors my sheath in metaphors
Each time I read out at open mic poetry nights
My body of art adorns a canvas of sound
And on pages from trees that surrendered their lives
Saving my bark from branding with a permanent mark
My personal choice means after death I'll still have a voice
Then when my poems are read I am resurrected
As my rainbow of rhyme survives chiseled in time
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Re. My Body of Ink
Anonymous
11th May 2016 9:24am
JJ, your poems are forever etched in my heart
Your words get under my skin without leaving a mark
You've tattooed my soul in places not even God has seen
And taken my muse to heights no lover has been
Keep it up poetryman
Cause keepin' it up is the best art on a man
Your words get under my skin without leaving a mark
You've tattooed my soul in places not even God has seen
And taken my muse to heights no lover has been
Keep it up poetryman
Cause keepin' it up is the best art on a man
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Re: Re. My Body of Ink
11th May 2016 9:36am
Thank you for the poetic comment Heather! I enjoyed that immensly, made my night!!!
JJ
JJ
Re. My Body of Ink
11th May 2016 1:41pm
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11th May 2016 4:33pm
Re. My Body of Ink
11th May 2016 5:35pm
JJ what a beautiful write..
yes your poetic voice will live on..
so wonderful..
love Brenda
yes your poetic voice will live on..
so wonderful..
love Brenda
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Re: Re. My Body of Ink
12th May 2016 00:05am
Thank you Brenda! I hope so, there is nothing else to leave behind. I won't even have a gravestone...
Appreciate the read!
JJ
Appreciate the read!
JJ
Re. My Body of Ink
Anonymous
12th May 2016 00:30am
*brilliant*, as always...
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Re: Re. My Body of Ink
12th May 2016 3:54am
What can I say Lyn, I'm just marvelous, lololol!
Thank you for the very generous comment!
JJ
Thank you for the very generous comment!
JJ
Re. My Body of Ink
12th May 2016 3:09pm
"My body of art adorns a canvas of sound
And on pages from trees that surrendered their lives
Saving my bark from branding with a permanent mark "
Excellent !!
And on pages from trees that surrendered their lives
Saving my bark from branding with a permanent mark "
Excellent !!
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Re: Re. My Body of Ink
13th May 2016 8:28pm
Re. My Body of Ink
12th May 2016 6:30pm
"My body of art adorns a canvas of sound"
Sir, this is beautiful, in my mind I can see the letters dance in the air as you stand on stage. Your ink is on pages to yellow with time...I'm sure your art will continue to echo. Beautiful! :)
Sir, this is beautiful, in my mind I can see the letters dance in the air as you stand on stage. Your ink is on pages to yellow with time...I'm sure your art will continue to echo. Beautiful! :)
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Re: Re. My Body of Ink
12th May 2016 7:33pm
Re. My Body of Ink
13th May 2016 6:23pm
far better to have a realiseible legacy - the body rots :-(
original idea, well expressed :-)
original idea, well expressed :-)
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Re: Re. My Body of Ink
13th May 2016 9:15pm
True indeed David. With my luck they will bury me with my books and no one will ever read them unless grave robbers dig me up hoping to find something valuable. And if they read my books, they will! Perhaps my poems will inspire them to write poetry and stop robbing graves...
Thanks for commenting!
JJ
Thanks for commenting!
JJ
Re. My Body of Ink
13th May 2016 9:19pm
...your body of art adorns a canvas that has become 'my' body, because you do leave your signature on my skin. Pen love jj...
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Re: Re. My Body of Ink
13th May 2016 9:27pm
Oh my dear Rain, your verse has colored my heart 50 shades of ink...
Pen love indeed!
JJ
Pen love indeed!
JJ
Re. My Body of Ink
16th May 2016 8:08am
Re. My Body of Ink
Anonymous
19th May 2016 11:24am
wow..this is amazing poetryman...great metaphor and title, double entendre in the title. I too have no body ink and the last two lines are masterful..like you took the words right out of my head for the very reason, only reason I write other than I'm compelled to; because it transcends death and becomes immortalized...and with poets usually ONLY then..lol...GREAT WRITE...enjoyed it immensely and thank you for following a newbie here and checking out my scribbles..peace
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Re: Re. My Body of Ink
Thank you for a pretty amazing comment fb8. The title was a process of it's own. I don't usually write titles before I even begin the poem, but I had a few thoughts and couldn't decide which one to use so I combined them. I liked the idea of having more than one meaning in the same assemblage of words. It all started rolling around in my head because I saw a comp thread about tattoos in the forums that I can't enter and was thinking, I may not have a body with ink, but I certainly have a body of ink. It reminded me of a picture one of the other poets here uses on their profile of poetry written all over her body. It's a thought provoking pic in many way. Our body of work is a body of art is a body of ink...
So when I leave my body behind, my ink will not require opening my coffin to read me, they can open my books to see me...
After I am dead, each time my poems ate read, I am resurrected...
JJ
So when I leave my body behind, my ink will not require opening my coffin to read me, they can open my books to see me...
After I am dead, each time my poems ate read, I am resurrected...
JJ
Re: Re. My Body of Ink
Anonymous
20th May 2016 8:26am
YW...just shows inspiration comes from everywhere too..like you said about the forum and I agree, the more multiple meanings usually the cooler the writing; like the group Tool. That's why they never put their lyrics in their albums...well it's been ten years since they made one damnit..lol..but when they did..to force the listener to look them up and then really think about all the possibilities..come up with their own interpretation..and as to resurrection, art seems to have a standing outside space and time quality to it, immortal...put it on my reading list JJ...will be reading more in time for sure..peace
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