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the afternoon rain
I walked in the rain today,
I felt it falling on my neck
and on my ear, the image
fell within me in peaceful accord.
Published 8th May 2016
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8th May 2016 10:37pm
It hardly rains here. I don't know how this is a tropical environment. I cannot recall the last time it rained buckets, all day and night. Years, at least.
For about three days now my system has been dolorously raped by the pollen; it was awful, and so this day has been welcome. The rain today has been slow and steady here in Missouri. It is so green and pretty.
8th May 2016 11:36pm
"dolorously raped" omg! I almost spit my coffee! ahaha! Glorious. I have allergies and mild asthma. I know just what you mean. You are such a delight. :D
8th May 2016 11:25pm
We typically experience Spring storms nightly (or at least most of the week)
here during this time. I love them. The smell of rain intoxicates me.
Love this read.
here during this time. I love them. The smell of rain intoxicates me.
Love this read.
8th May 2016 11:35pm
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