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a love sonnet
the sun might refuse to rise tomorrow
she know she will lose to your shining face
how it blind me and burns all my sorrow
the heat melting me flashing through your lace
night sky is darker than the yesterday
young stars weren't allowed to see us tonight
stars were too young to see our adult play
so the clouds put a screen between their light
naughty thoughts are floating around the room
grab a random one and show it to me
lets turn this into an erotic bloom
let me start with a soft kiss on your knee
I will hold you in my arms till morning
to smirk at the sun while you are sleeping
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Published 1st May 2016
| Edited 2nd May 2016
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Anonymous
1st May 2016 1:59pm
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Anonymous
2nd May 2016 5:22am
Dejure, you sweep me high and far,
can only breathe of you incrementally.
So riveting
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can only breathe of you incrementally.
So riveting
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2nd May 2016 7:19am
2nd May 2016 10:16am
Vick this is stunning...to honour love in such a way...opened my jaded heart...thank you. LR :)
2nd May 2016 10:36am
Aww Thank you Lady R.
You gave me a boost to my lethargy evening with your lovely comment :)
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You gave me a boost to my lethargy evening with your lovely comment :)
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