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You Make Me Feel....

Daylight stretches out across the horizon
Singing the songs that we sang before
The sunset softly calls me home again
But I have so much further to roam

You make me feel…
You make me feel…
You make me feel…
You make me feel…

Blue fades to gray in the strangest ways
Silver specks of starlight greet the end of the day
Stepping through the spaces forming footprints in the sand
I want to feel your hand in my hand

You make me feel… you make me feel better.
You make me feel… you make me feel better.
You make me feel… you make me feel better.
You make me feel… you make me feel better.

Feel the cool grass press on my back, lying under a tree
Watching the autumn light dance all over me
I’ve got no wants I’ve got no needs

You make me feel…you make me feel better.


(I included a rough recording made while we were writing it. We were just jamming and the words don't always come out smoothly as I make them up on the spot. haha I'll try to put up a better recording later.)
Written by sammy4444
Published | Edited 28th Apr 2016
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