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And It Is
It is the epitome of slow burn
there is no way pics do justice
how do you put a star in a box
or make Dollar Tree Saks 5th?
The accents of fashion
inspire a desire to reveal more
model like features
but healthy stats galore
Not the waif or stick thin figure
womanhood in full effect
could she bring to life
Coltrane's "A Love Supreme"?
Monuments, vaults of gold
are riches men will cherish
the intangibles won't translate
into capitalistic paradigms
There are arcs of various lengths
durations can't always be certain
one absolute in this world
she always travels the preferred path
there is no way pics do justice
how do you put a star in a box
or make Dollar Tree Saks 5th?
The accents of fashion
inspire a desire to reveal more
model like features
but healthy stats galore
Not the waif or stick thin figure
womanhood in full effect
could she bring to life
Coltrane's "A Love Supreme"?
Monuments, vaults of gold
are riches men will cherish
the intangibles won't translate
into capitalistic paradigms
There are arcs of various lengths
durations can't always be certain
one absolute in this world
she always travels the preferred path
Published 24th Apr 2016
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24th Apr 2016 11:24pm
You have left me to form my own images and my mind to travel it's own path with your word choice.
I like poems that set me on journey and choose which sights to enjoy.
The Dollar Tree Saks Fifth Avenue visual is priceless. Thank You
I like poems that set me on journey and choose which sights to enjoy.
The Dollar Tree Saks Fifth Avenue visual is priceless. Thank You
25th Apr 2016 00:16am
You are very welcome bro. Started this just before the purple one's passing, but by the time I did get to the finish, he wasn't far from my thoughts.
25th Apr 2016 6:29am
25th Apr 2016 2:16pm
27th Apr 2016 4:32am
"Monuments, vaults of gold
are riches men will cherish
the intangibles won't translate
into capitalistic paradigms"<---- Good lawd, this was on the money! Freakin' loved it....
are riches men will cherish
the intangibles won't translate
into capitalistic paradigms"<---- Good lawd, this was on the money! Freakin' loved it....
5th May 2016 4:46am
You have such a unique voice,
very distinguishable.. which is
adored greatly because of reading
the same over and over again.
Appreciative I am.
-Howlings
very distinguishable.. which is
adored greatly because of reading
the same over and over again.
Appreciative I am.
-Howlings
5th May 2016 5:24am
26th Jun 2016 4:16pm
