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Why came the rain....
When
came the rain
it
drenched
my soul
as much as
the village!
For the village
it was indeed a gift
a blessing
from heaven!
For me,
I am not sure.
It did raise my
spirits
felt the cloud-burst
on me
took me
to the sky
made me feel
one floating amongst them!
And then,
as the grey
when they left
left me desolate
a bit
disparately
desparate.
Published 22nd Apr 2016
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22nd Apr 2016 1:41am
Don't fear, for there will always be other ways to reach those clouds. You must be the one to find them though. That village you speak about should have some great ideas you can ask wisdom from. Who knows. I support all those who are learning to fly.
22nd Apr 2016 1:47am
Welcome BloodRoses! deeply appreciate your thoughts on this as well as your kind words of support. Thank you once again for visiting with me!!
Cheers!
KDAmB
Cheers!
KDAmB
22nd Apr 2016 2:38am
Never fear a good mudding is always near...now where did i put my tribal rain stick...Xx L
22nd Apr 2016 2:44am
Thank You and welcome..... :) this I reckon am onto a good calling song for the rain.. for it has proven once already!! and you know who it was inked for...
22nd Apr 2016 10:54pm
You can always do the rain dance to invoke the rain .. Though I highly doubt it would be that effective.. Hehehe
Paul
Paul
Hehehe! you're so right Paul! The only rain of sorts that can be guaranteed would be that of tears either coz of excessive laughter or embarrasment to the folks watching!! Hahahaha...
25th Apr 2016 6:15pm
25th Apr 2016 10:37pm
Thank You Dave! Am glad you liked it. Always loved your input, means a lot!
Cheers!
KDAmB
Cheers!
KDAmB
