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Worm
You make me twitch, you make me squirm
undulating on the floor just like a worm
You make me wince, you make me wheeze
while pathetically pleading on my knees
i'm such a sleaze
i´m on my back, i'm on the ground
and agonizing for your every pound
i kiss your hand, you slap my face
and kick my ass all over the place
i'm a disgrace
You make me work, you make me clean
my duties are both filthy and obscene
i get no thanks under your reign
holy Venus, here you come again
i'm in pain
i am a worm, yes i am your slave
every inch of you i dearly crave
strip me bare and call me rich
until i don't know which is which
i'm your bitch
undulating on the floor just like a worm
You make me wince, you make me wheeze
while pathetically pleading on my knees
i'm such a sleaze
i´m on my back, i'm on the ground
and agonizing for your every pound
i kiss your hand, you slap my face
and kick my ass all over the place
i'm a disgrace
You make me work, you make me clean
my duties are both filthy and obscene
i get no thanks under your reign
holy Venus, here you come again
i'm in pain
i am a worm, yes i am your slave
every inch of you i dearly crave
strip me bare and call me rich
until i don't know which is which
i'm your bitch
Published 19th Apr 2016
| Edited 6th May 2016
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20th Apr 2016 11:52am
Your rhyme n rhythm are pretty smooth, the subject of basically being willing to do whatever for your object if affection, well although it sounds good on 'paper'
always leaves me wondering where all these 'generously willing women at' becuz I've never in life met one! lol
always leaves me wondering where all these 'generously willing women at' becuz I've never in life met one! lol
20th Apr 2016 12:45pm
Sure you've met them, you just don't know it :-)
i wrote this poem for fun and of course it is a bit over the top,
but that's what i meant to do.
Thanks for the compliment Poetikmind
i wrote this poem for fun and of course it is a bit over the top,
but that's what i meant to do.
Thanks for the compliment Poetikmind
20th Apr 2016 1:11pm
20th Apr 2016 1:47pm
Most submissive females just keep it to themselves, me being the obvious exception, but then i'm a blabbermouth and like to
touch on subjects often avoided. From what i've seen, you do a bit of that too. Stupid you are not. :-)
Thanks gent
touch on subjects often avoided. From what i've seen, you do a bit of that too. Stupid you are not. :-)
Thanks gent
24th Apr 2016 4:14am
See, I told you not to take Debbie to your dungeon. Now she's getting her revenge.
"i am a worm, yes i am your slave
every inch of you i dearly crave
strip me bare and call me rich
until i don't know which is which
i'm your bitch"
That's some good verse your throwing down there kid.
"i am a worm, yes i am your slave
every inch of you i dearly crave
strip me bare and call me rich
until i don't know which is which
i'm your bitch"
That's some good verse your throwing down there kid.
24th Apr 2016 4:37am
That's why i was reading Deborah all that poetry, i wanted it.
Very glad you like it snugglebuck
Very glad you like it snugglebuck
3rd Aug 2016 3:13am
Brilliant ink! Love the rhythm and the rhyme and can identify with the subject... or should we call it object ;-)
3rd Aug 2016 10:33am
3rd Aug 2016 12:56pm
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18th Mar 2018 11:19am
30th Apr 2018 9:24pm
i have never had an occasion
to such a gals version
unless one is a maid
and paid
even then has to be treated
as a woman
when laid
to such a gals version
unless one is a maid
and paid
even then has to be treated
as a woman
when laid
30th Apr 2018 9:29pm
14th May 2018 9:51pm
wormish warm he
yesterday again saw a guy.... was the one so shy
Gain wished he was not a guy
as he was shy
could have been bi or when laid
in his skirt high
was like a gal a bird flying inn the sky
all could see what he was really
sweet guy
i wonder why why he was not the one
who deserved a skirt only
why does nature create guys
with poles
when they look far better with holes
Again wonders can you say why
such kinds cannot any one lay
just to play
on a hot sunny a day
do say
yesterday again saw a guy.... was the one so shy
Gain wished he was not a guy
as he was shy
could have been bi or when laid
in his skirt high
was like a gal a bird flying inn the sky
all could see what he was really
sweet guy
i wonder why why he was not the one
who deserved a skirt only
why does nature create guys
with poles
when they look far better with holes
Again wonders can you say why
such kinds cannot any one lay
just to play
on a hot sunny a day
do say
14th May 2018 10:16pm
14th May 2018 10:17pm
14th May 2018 10:33pm
27th Jul 2021 3:00am
peer chance this happens
to be my third instance
of visit
how heaven knows
poetess you are good
poetry wise
to be my third instance
of visit
how heaven knows
poetess you are good
poetry wise
27th Jul 2021 10:34am
27th Jul 2021 5:18pm
