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'A-Sic Mind' Frights...'
'Til night falls...
that's when wary eyes
ascend '8 flights...'
tis a wonder, under blue
moon's sight, is this
guise a ruse' light?
A view, asunder this
plight, so marred- scarred
tissue...
at issue thy plunder, the
plummeting stars' flight...
A fallacy, malignant-me-
stilled, dyin' to comprehend
the broken soul's culling to write...
Published 17th Apr 2016
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Anonymous
- Edited 17th Apr 2016 3:44pm
17th Apr 2016 3:25pm
The broken...
The tattered..
The worn
The emotion
The scattered....
for that is where poetry is born :)
enjoyed -dkruie
The tattered..
The worn
The emotion
The scattered....
for that is where poetry is born :)
enjoyed -dkruie
18th Apr 2016 2:38am
Anonymous
- Edited 17th Apr 2016 3:47pm
17th Apr 2016 3:39pm
Quintessentially salvaging
memoirs... fright and all.
In between -above-here-and
belows
Damnn it, you caught me. Why
cant ever hide?. Those perversed
critters called- 'thoughts
Lovely dish.
memoirs... fright and all.
In between -above-here-and
belows
Damnn it, you caught me. Why
cant ever hide?. Those perversed
critters called- 'thoughts
Lovely dish.
18th Apr 2016 2:42am
Even when you think you've evaded those thoughts, well of course you realize you haven't lol... Thank u my dearest :) grateful always :)
18th Apr 2016 4:21am
……there is always a ruse when you’re looking through wary eyes. A calm and focused mind will clear up blurred eyes… #wink
Love it hun….
Love it hun….
18th Apr 2016 8:03am
Lol you're sooooooo right my sweetheart lol... Truly n always grateful
for you :)
for you :)
18th Apr 2016 5:48am
18th Apr 2016 8:05am
18th Apr 2016 5:51pm
Intense dark and gripping spillage bro...so deep with meaning... Your artwork really adds to the shadowy ambiance. ..masterfully done indeed!!
19th Apr 2016 2:55am
My dear bro. I honestly don't know where I'd be without your continued support n inspiration, it seems like everytime I think
Yup, that's it for me, you pen something amazing n then I'm like wow.... That's just the boost I need :) big thanks kid, peace n love to u n urs
Yup, that's it for me, you pen something amazing n then I'm like wow.... That's just the boost I need :) big thanks kid, peace n love to u n urs
18th Apr 2016 10:27pm
This was crazy fucking good some serious edge to it. Loved it, my list loves it as well. <3
18th Apr 2016 10:59pm
Aaaawwww... N to you many hugs n kisses... :) thank you so much my dear lady, deeply grateful for the support n list add :)
19th Apr 2016 2:33pm
Such emotion from deep within ....as always i enjoy your artistic spills...great flow....gret presentation....the picture in itself speaks volumes.
19th Apr 2016 2:36pm
19th Apr 2016 7:29pm
Raising the poetical bar my friend
Great picture too
Kinda scary as popped onto my screen
Lol
Great picture too
Kinda scary as popped onto my screen
Lol
19th Apr 2016 11:36pm
Wow....I'm deeply flattered to ur name pop up in my comments! thank ISO much! :) you made my day sweetness :)
20th Apr 2016 1:27pm
In my head, I'm reading this under a blue moon, letting your words seep deep into my skin, deep just like this write. I'm not used to this format of writing, I think it's beautifully done. :)
20th Apr 2016 1:38pm
Aaawww my precious dark one, you me blushing! :) big thanks to you for your words n support, I truly appreciate it :)
Anonymous
21st Apr 2016 7:32pm
PM!, the pic, terrifyingly stunning, the write....hauntingly amazing....pen respect!
With love - Taryn xoxo
With love - Taryn xoxo
21st Apr 2016 8:37pm
Taryn!! You rock!! Thank you my dear I truly appreciate your support always :)
22nd Apr 2016 8:14am
“a poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness.”
― robert frost
^^^^^^^
i think that's a sign that you're doing something right :)
this is beautifully melancholy
xo
― robert frost
^^^^^^^
i think that's a sign that you're doing something right :)
this is beautifully melancholy
xo
22nd Apr 2016 8:17am
