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komorebi
a ceasing forenoon, a shaded recline,
a crystalline stare into a lush canopy
and its numerous branching understories
such a subtle embrace with the earth,
such immense space between you and the speckled barrier
through which the sky beyond permeates
every breath of breeze washes over you,
grazing your skin, kissing your lips,
running its whispy fingers through your hair
you notice your mind arrive in your head,
back from a realm high above
populous with green, yellow, and tinges of blue
a moment of conscious affection,
interrupted only by another spiriting draft,
and once again you drift...
Published 8th Apr 2016
| Edited 5th Oct 2016
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8th Apr 2016 7:07am
8th Apr 2016 10:17am
9th Apr 2016 10:33pm
Thank you for taking me away far.. far from here. . Gratefully enjoy'd
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Anonymous
4th Oct 2016 11:36pm
Absolutely lovely. Such dreamy imagery that engages the senses and pulls you into the little world you've created with it. I really enjoyed this.
3rd May 2017 6:55pm
every breath of breeze washes over you,
grazing your skin, kissing your lips,
running its whispy fingers through your hair
you notice your mind arrive in your head,
back from a realm high above
populous with green, yellow, and tinges of blue
.............
this is such a great description of deep meditation and then the arrival back into the clatter of thought and the material
grazing your skin, kissing your lips,
running its whispy fingers through your hair
you notice your mind arrive in your head,
back from a realm high above
populous with green, yellow, and tinges of blue
.............
this is such a great description of deep meditation and then the arrival back into the clatter of thought and the material
