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Love and Twist
Desperate for
Quench
Squeezing thighs against perversion
And my drench
He rocks my resistance
With lullaby touch
Brings desire
Sings incendiary
Seduction
his scent
Inhaled
patchouli and clove cigarettes
Sends me
And I soon forget
His ways that scar thick
Falling into bed and infatuation...
Until i come home
To unsettling sight
Of him up man...
I watch arroused
In spite of my self..
And join in....
Quench
Squeezing thighs against perversion
And my drench
He rocks my resistance
With lullaby touch
Brings desire
Sings incendiary
Seduction
his scent
Inhaled
patchouli and clove cigarettes
Sends me
And I soon forget
His ways that scar thick
Falling into bed and infatuation...
Until i come home
To unsettling sight
Of him up man...
I watch arroused
In spite of my self..
And join in....
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Re. Love and Twist
1st Apr 2016 8:27am
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1st Apr 2016 8:31am
Thanks for the read...and its sweet to see you...been a while. Adore you sweetness...
Love
J
Love
J
Re. Love and Twist
Anonymous
1st Apr 2016 3:45pm
Did not see that cumming?
You always intrigue me.
You always intrigue me.
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Re: Re. Love and Twist
5th Apr 2016 4:04pm
Its great to see you around sugar..ive been meaning to read...big hig Slo...
Love
Jen
Love
Jen
Re. Love and Twist
1st Apr 2016 6:35pm
WOW! Quite a surprise twist. You write them like none other my love. Fan fucking tastic. ;-)
Love ya,
John
Love ya,
John
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Re: Re. Love and Twist
5th Apr 2016 4:03pm
Lol...you know me baby. I aim to please, myself. Lol i love you so friggin much! Big smoooch!
Love eternally
Jennifer
Love eternally
Jennifer
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Re: Re. Love and Twist
5th Apr 2016 4:01pm
Which one..i will have to read that one! Not that i dont always thoroughly enjoy anything you write my darlin Walt..big hug.
Love
J
Love
J
Re. Love and Twist
4th Apr 2016 6:26pm
Ahhh, calamitygin, luv ~ :-*
This piece is disturbingly erotic, as I believe you intended, ne c'est pas?
Oh, how I know those ones whose "ways...scar thick" ~ oh yes, indeed...and how seductive they can be despite oneself, even one's want...
You write this with a deft hand, sparingly, yet with enough detail for what's truly important to blaze.
Ahhh, luv, luv, a kiss and hug from me to you... :-*
This piece is disturbingly erotic, as I believe you intended, ne c'est pas?
Oh, how I know those ones whose "ways...scar thick" ~ oh yes, indeed...and how seductive they can be despite oneself, even one's want...
You write this with a deft hand, sparingly, yet with enough detail for what's truly important to blaze.
Ahhh, luv, luv, a kiss and hug from me to you... :-*
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Re: Re. Love and Twist
5th Apr 2016 4:00pm
Yes..i was wicked here...but i love some wicked ways...💋 ill take the hug and kiss and return them with a grin...
Love always
Jen
Love always
Jen
Re. Love and Twist
5th Apr 2016 2:57pm
Haha well played Jen great idea to add the comedic twist at the end
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Re: Re. Love and Twist
5th Apr 2016 3:57pm
No joke...i dove right in between the duded. Yeah baby...lol thanks sweetheart..nice to meet you...i will be returning the read and comment soon darlin...great avatar...
Love
Jen
Love
Jen