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Flawless, Lawless

I'm obsolete  
And just incomplete  
Who are you to see inside  
and not make a comment?  
Who are you to see me hide,  
And sit in your resentment?  
   
Flawless  
Lawless  
My heart is a war zone  
And I'm afraid I want more  
I'm simply a clone  
Of what was here before  
   
I'm fading out  
I'm screaming out  
But my words don't reach ears  
Can you comprehend?  
I'm losing all my air  
I'm afraid this is the end  
   
Flawless  
Lawless  
My brain is a war zone  
And I'm afraid I want more  
I'm simply a clone  
Of what was here before  
   
Checkered flags  
And writing tags  
I'm at the finish line  
And I don't want to wait my turn  
Can you tell me it'll be fine?  
While I burn?
Written by Llywenllyn
Published | Edited 26th May 2016
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